Rainbow dash loses her memory in an accident and wakes up with no memory of her past self but brief sounds and sensations, she is thrown into the world with only her old 'friends' and new fears and old responsibilities, she must find out what happened to her and, why there is this mysterious pony following her.
This is really good so far: watching this one.
Keep up the good work
Yeah, you should continue it.
Except some grammar error, it's pretty good, keep it up!
By the way, how did Dashie lost her memory?
906538 That's part of the whole "Suspense" thing I believe.
907021Can't wait for him to continue it!
907033 Agreed. :D
Interesting concept. Just a bit of grammatical errors.
I like the idea, and want to see where it goes. I'll watch.
Wow i am lovig the positive feedback. Also on the update i write 200-300 words a day on this so depending on how long you guys want it that will be the amount of time it takes also if anyone wants to be a prereader please message me i am in need of one.
Wow this i retty good hurry up with the next one please :)
i like it!
Btw i wrote all this in the loading screens for skyrim, long load is long
Hahaha, what the heck happened?
Though I have to agree with the "author" in this story. It's tough to make a good mane-6-turned-to-alicorn-story; I'm glad you decided to sway against that direction.
So, just to clarify: nothing in this chapter actually happened?
909555 eyup nothing in that chapter it was just all a nonsensica dreaml
hahaha, lolwut?
I'm soooo tracking this. You've got some really good ideas in that brain of yours, and I like them
i'd rather have a RD and Twillight are alicorns then them being earth ponies
913899 no theyre not earth ponies it was all a dream/mishmash of memories
With a bit of editing, this could be pretty interesting.
There's a romance tag, but no hints so far: what have you got planned for the pairings?
Don't worry I liked all the chps
1004189 thanks its just that the last one was really short and forced, well thats what i get for trying to write a chapter on a computer btw im lonely on xbox live
Btw who can guess why scarlet is so effed in the head. And no it's okay maybe a form of schizophernia
1004766 I have a Xbox live account it is (removed) I think if it isn't give me yours
.......................................................................... Is all I have to say too this whole series. No, rather " WHAT DAFUQ AM I READING!?!?!?"
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Exactly what I'm saying....
Umm... What?
Anyway, this is a good story. Could use some tweaks here and there (and perhaps some slightly better description of things, I'm so confused), but overall, a nice conflict (Dash gets amnesia; we don't know why) and some well placed humor (cut off by the door; Classic in my book). There are some grammar and spelling mistakes that I would probably make myself were it not for Word Spellcheck. This is good. I hope you continue.
1121402 yay i have been awarded my first wtf gif
This is a GREAT IDEA, but the grammar, spelling, and overall way of the writing needs work. I really want to like this...but I can't. This has the potential, please don't waste it.