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Dr Atlas


"When I get old, I am going to be: Rice. Frisco style." - Ed 2004

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Realizing the position they're in, the changelings decide on a different plan than the one their queen's giving.

Author's idearz: Some credit goes to this person. They did a thing and I decided to do another thing they did by basing it on the thing with this thing while they did their thing...

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Well... This was an interesting alternate take on the episode. I must wonder, with the Bug-Bitch's rating among the Changelings, why it didn't happen sooner? Tyrants almost never really work out well in the long run. There are always revolts.

Ha! I like this! I kind of wish Starlight had said something along the lines of, "It happened with Thorax, why not them?" but I think that would've taken away from the humor, and she was probably a little too freaked to think of it anyway.
Upvoted.

So it's no longer just my opinion. Changelings are in fact revolting.

Not sorry. Ever.

Realizing the position they're in, the changelings decide on a different plan then the one their queen's giving.

Heads up, you have an error in your description: it's than in this context, not then. Then would imply that they try their plan and then the queen's, not their plan instead of their queen's.

:twilightoops: Spike I can understand you and Rarity but who's this other guy?

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:pinkiesmile: Doomie?

At the part where the link goes to the Aqua Teen Hunger Force, it doesn't start to the video.

Question:... How yo do dat?

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True, but consider that Saddam Hussein ruled virtually unchallenged until the AMERICANS decided to invade. Only then did his government fail. And before that happened, the hope was that his two sons would take over ruling when he died and then have a falling out, throwing the country into a civil war. There is also North Korea, which is in its seventh decade and the son has replaced the father with ZERO signs of any loss of power.

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But I should point out North Korea is staying static, if you will. It's not evolving in any way.

8258718 Well, not counting their nuclear program. Which is a little like giving a baby a box of hand grenades.
8258654 Um. No. Read up on it. There's a reason why he stayed on top of the heap, and that reason was worth whole swimming pools of blood and lots of mass graves. One of the reasons he was not deposed was that his tribe (and religious sect) was a minority, and that any sign of weakness would lead to an Iranian-backed rebellion. He was a murderous cold-blooded killer, and his kids were psychopaths.

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If you right-click on a YouTube video, you can click "Copy Video URL At Current TIme."

Like this: https://youtu.be/Z0LgI6nF0rM?t=3913

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Also, remember that the Changelings were also under the impression that that was how they had to feed.

And also, she ruled by fear. And probably conditioning, too.

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Hey there were no riots under Sombra's rule. Chryssy found food for the changelings, so maybe she wasn't a tyrant.

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There were no riots under Sombra's rule, because he utilised something known as 'mind control', which suppresses the ponies' free will.
Why do you think the crystal ponies were so out of it when the Crystal Empire returned? Remnants of Sombra's mind control.
Haven't watched the episode in forever, but I'm certain Alternate-Timeline Sombra placed mind control helmets onto his subjects, to wage war against Celestia's ponies.

With mind control, Sombra could do anything he wanted - peasants starving? Don't matter - they don't realise they're hungry until they die. Common ponies having traitorous thoughts? Don't exist, due to mind control. Need a source of soldiers to fight the war? Have a couple of mares and stallions in a 'foal farm', educate the foals in nothing but warfare, and have them fight until they literally die of exhaustion.
It doesn't take a genius to figure out what he would've done to Celestia (and Luna, if she returned and was no longer under Nightmare Moon's control) should he have won - personal slave/slaves, perhaps?

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It was never stated that he used mind control. It's possible that it was just fear that kept the ponies under his control.

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Yeah, the after-effects were basically PTSD.

Which is some of what made me realize that MLP was awesome, if they were brave enough to include that in a children's cartoon.

8259273 I think I did it right

"peaking through" should be "peeking through".

Chrysalis gritted her teeth, never feeling such anger in her life from what she was hearing. “You JUDAS! How could you turn on me!?”

He shrugged, "Celestia offered me 30 bits."

Chrysalis face-hooves, "I walked straight into that joke..."

:trollestia:

this was pretty amusing and I wouldn't mind seeing more of it. :twilightsmile:

Admit it, queen, without us...you’re nothing. Nothing but a bully and liar whose first impulse is to ponynap and take over!

Chrysalis: "And swearing revenge! I'm pretty good at that! Right Right?"

Good to see the changelings from your other stories back!

Chrysalis’s eye twitched as Phil leaned back in Twilight’s chair. “So here’s what we’re gonna do: We’re gonna tell the other ponies about what’s going on, show them where our hive is, tell them to bring an army in a half, and make it be the worst day of your life while we see it as a tuesday.”

Happy Tuesday!

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Correct: He's the very definition of a TYRANT! You just proved my point. It is NOT inevitable that the population of a Tyrant will rise up in revolt. Both North Korea and Iraq proved that point.

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I don't think it works with the embed feature. I don't see a link or a video in your comment. I think you just paste the link directly in the comment.

8260951 It works for me. The link is within the word "this"

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Oh, I forgot that FimFiction stopped coloring links green. Stupid change, in my opinion, if they only underline when you're hovering over them.

Thanks for taking an interest into this story, everyone...but...
I just don't get it...
Stories that take me months to plan out, weeks to write, and days to look over barely get noticed.
While fics that took me a couple minutes to plan, three hours to write, and a few minutes to look over get to the featured box...
...
I can't even...
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Don't stress about writing fanfiction. It's a hobby right? The best stories come from when you feel an urge to write. Forcing yourself might cause you to doubt yourself, therefore editing what might of been amazing.

Great story btw

This is so hilarious, including how Starlight and Trixie's dialogue keep getting repeated by Chrysalis :rainbowlaugh:

One of the funniest stories i've read! :rainbowlaugh:
Good job!

“You...You IDIOTS!” Chrysalis growled.

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Something I thought reading that phrase... please don't hate me :fluttercry:

“There’s a little thing called: ‘talking it out’ that we could’ve done. We’ve seen these ponies make peace with disfigured hawks and oversized fluffy bulls, the elements even forgave that mutant goat! And he did worse things than you, queen!”

I'm a little lost here... Is he referring to Grogar? :rainbowhuh:

“A-Are you serious!? I...I can’t believe this!” Chrysalis’s eyes were starting to turn red while Starlight and Trixie’s faces turned deadpan, getting sick of this shtick.

Uh? :rainbowhuh:
*Searching word*
Well... I learned a new word :trixieshiftright:

Starlight looked back at them,seeing them either jumping for joy or hitting each other playfully, though that soon led to headbutting, tackling, smacking, and punching, one of them threw a brother on the table while another grabbed him and threw him into one of the chairs, making it crack. Both mares looked in both horror and fascination as the roughhousing continued.

:rainbowlaugh: PRICELESS! :rainbowlaugh:

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… I just realized that. Huh. If it helps, I wouldn't mind looking over some of your other stories?

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*Facepalm*
Sometimes I'm a little TOO lost... :raritycry:

8261851
Welcome to my world. And just about every other pony writer's world.:ajsleepy:

This was hilarious.

Really funny story. Though, it would be nice to see a sequel where they attack the hive, but it's pretty obvious how it would end. It would probably be better if it was made into a really comedic easy battle, similar to this one. that's just my opinion, though, do whatever you want.

“We did some more math on that and found out that the ratio between changelings and...everyone else is about sixty eight to one...so close to make a joke, sadly…”

Well, if everyling and everypony came together, the joke is still there?


*ba-dum, tish!*


:facehoof:

That was a nice and funny story to read.

Errr... Something that I feel should have been pointed out LONG ago - "unanimous"specifically means total agreement. A 12 out of 15 vote is not unanimous. A 15 out of 15 would be.

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Knowing her children never had a proper education, she rolled her eyes and chuckled.

True, but they ain't the brightest tools in the shed, are they? :twilightsheepish:

What's with those Changeling names?

Some of them looked away. “Raised is too strong of a word.” Marvin said. “I’d use...completely forget about and let the caretakers, who you also don’t care about, take care of us.”

Someone get a burn heal, holy shit

Phil smiled. “Since Chrys is out of the way, we can move to step five.” Phil turned to the cracked open door and held his hoof to the side of his mouth. “You can come in now, she’s gone!”

Hahahahahahahaha they knew the whole time, 10/10, much better than the show

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GOD I loved this fic, a million points to changelingpuff

I certainly understand problems in the family, but to want to directly destroy your mother it seems to me too much through the chur

Vive la Revolucion!

Chrysalis’s eye twitched as Phil leaned back in Twilight’s chair. “So here’s what we’re gonna do: We’re gonna tell the other ponies about what’s going on, show them where our hive is, tell them to bring an army in a half, and make it be the worst day of your life while we see it as a tuesday.”

I feel like this should have happened, outside of thorax, more changeling would have question their queen on global take overs after the first attempt. Especially given other races that are slowly forging bonds with the pony race

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