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"I haven't seen a bigger waste of talent since Dan Marino." -Lucky Seven; Want to support me?

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The GREAT and POWERFUL Trixie, at the urging of Starlight Glimmer, has embarked on the first show of her next tour of Equestria. Arriving in Fillydelphia and obsessed with making everything perfect, she runs afoul of a number of locals, who in turn attempt to impede her progress towards making this show her best one yet.

Written for the Mana's Unsung Heroes contest! Prompt: Picking one of 14 different characters, write a story. "By the end of the story, your selected character must have done something heroic or worthy of praise."

EDIT: Recipient of a coveted 'Recommended' review by PresentPerfect, 8/4/17!

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Comments ( 12 )

Totally perform the Manticore Mouth Dive again. That was awesome.

Just... stay in there this time. :pinkiecrazy:

YOU KNOW NOTHING, JOHN SNOW!

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Why don't you pop your head in and see if you can find your manners in there? XD

8291045 What manners matter when matters are immaterial?

What a fun story. Trixie is able to overcome 10% external adversity and 90% being Trixie to put on a show!


8291772 Never change, Alondro.

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I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for your kind words :twilightsmile:

8293695 I have not since The Beginning. Troll God is Alpha and the Amiga!

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This was a nice little story. Trixie can't help but lapse into 'herself' when under stress, even when trying to better her personality. In reality, a person doesn't just transform overnight... unless they get a severe brain injury. That'll do it.

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Quite a fun little story. :) The teacup line was the best part.

You should always have your permits on hand.

"What are hands?" :rainbowhuh:

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Would it manner if I was? :V

8340801 It would matter, as a matter of fact, in the manner in which it affected your mannerisms.

Although this doesn't excuse Trixie being mean to everypony. I like that she did this for charity

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