On an obnoxiously bright and sunny day in Ponyville, Rainbow Dash decided to help Scootaloo learn to fly. What she didn't anticipate was Scootaloo slamming into the ground and eating the dirt.
Repeatedly.
Rated T for mild language.
Note: Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are still spoiled brats in this story.
Pre-read by randome284.
Proofread by Nightmare Darkness and AAIQU.
Cover art by FiddleArts on Deviantart.
Dislike. Not enough dirt-eating in this story.
All jokes aside, that was very cute.
Short, but sweet, Jack
Hit me up next time for edits, alright? I"m never that busy.
That's going to teach you how not to land, Scoots. You're not paying attention to that part.
Nice, cute story!
That was cute.
I noticed this. "She'd" is "she had"... so it is "glancing down at the crater that she had had formed". Other than that. It was a cute little story, and has given the hope that she (Scootaloo) can do it.
Very cute, with an episode feel to it. Loved it.
That means you do care
at least a little.
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Mhmm, but Scootaloo doesn't know the difference between "could care less" and "couldn't care less."
Glad someone noticed.
That was kinda cute.
8339967
It's something I have an uncanny ability for, grammar.
8340887
Thank you.
Cute story
She has parents!?!?!?!
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What? Do you think she's an orphan or something? That's just silly.
8342704
Right? I mean they totally don't imply something along those lines in parental glideance, this is a little girls show after all
Ah, pre-redemption Tiara. I haven't read one of dese for a while. This oughta be good...
You may want to go back and review that statement, Scoots...
Aw, that was sweet! They should do something like that in the series. It would be a good moment of sisterly bonding...
Overall, pretty good so have a thumb. I can't add to it my favourites because generally I like my fics to have a bit more action, but you characterisation is on point and it was an enjoyable read. That's it. Rock on!
8351772
This is a really good story.
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Thank you.
8427430
You're welcome.
Cute interaction. Makes me regret Scoots being straight up disabled in my series. Still, depends on how the character is written, cool interactions can happen to anyone.
8502143
I'm writing another story more closely following the interpreted canon of her character. Mostly a sad SoL story that will be out next weekend.
just a side note, if you have CMC tag then you don't really need Scootalloo tag
Random
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Good or bad?
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Neither, just random.