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Interesting...
(yes, the pun was intentional.)
I enjoyed the story, but am a bit confused by the terminology shifting somewhat randomly between equine terms (hoof, mare, etc.) & humanoid ones (mostly the use of 'hand'). Was this an editing goof, or intentional?
Keep the good stuff coming!
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Very sorry about the hoof thing. I kept saying mare on purpose. That was intentional. Where did you see me say hoof?
You had the anthro tag. This usually implies humanoid pony in appearance but with hands and standing upright on hooves. They also have the pony features, like horns and wings. So, I was confused at the use of 'feet'.
The way Fluttershy seemed at a loss as to how to get down from the flower when she could just fly down seems to imply more human than anthro.
Not sure why the mane 6 tag, only Fluttershy appears in the story.
On the other hand, I enjoyed this, and I don't go for tentacle fics. So, well done there. It was sweet and well written.
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You didn't get the colors did you? One does not simply have a set for anthro, but I see what you mean. I chose to just have them with horns or wings or both this time. It's the little things I miss a lot you know?
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What colours?
8418100
Each vine had a color representing one of the mane 6
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oh...okay. I didn't spot that, no. when you had a mane 6 tag I was expecting 'them', as it were. Quite clever though.