After a year of silence and peace, Jack Apple and her partner Rarity are thrust once again into a trial that tests them to their limits. Going from their home and across the sea, they may find that their true foe sat among them the entire time.
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Yeah, I'm pretty excited about doing that one, while this store is more straight forward, Gilda's will be a little harder to place
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Glad you're liking it!
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Sometimes you can care too much about a person and end up doing something harmful when you were trying to aid them, that's a bit what's showcased here, I feel. Glad you liked the Celestia bit, I had a lot of fun with it, considering the first story set in this world didn't have her doing much, was nice letting her get out and stretch her wings literally and metaphorically.
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Yeah, the seal is something I never really said much on the inner-workings in the first one, and this one I think I gave a bit more information on, but not enough to have it down to a concrete science. And I know what you mean, Rarity suffering seems different that Jack doing the same in a lot of ways, probably due to the masculine and feminine natures of them in a way.
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Words like that could have come outta Will's mouth, well put.
Hoo boy. I knew Twila was tempting fate with all of those variations on "what could possibly go wrong?" but I wasn't expecting her to leave Camelot completely. This could go very poorly indeed... but I suppose that's a tale for another day.
Speaking of which, I'm imagining Emperor Nobunaga with the voice of Mako, and you can't stop me.
As for Rarity's concerns about the necessity of the Grail... Only time will tell there.
Did a double take when I read name that surprised Celestia and Luna have such a diverse ancestry and I like how Nobunaga seems to be something of a dotting grandfather (minus a couple greats)
Is Luna pregnant?!
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Yeah I can picture Mako here
... now I have a mental picture of Nobunaga, Will and Luna sing Four Seasons