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Slateblu1


I love to write, and I'll write just about anything. I seem to be most well known for my stupid little comedy pieces though...

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Sunset Shimmer has been apologizing to everyone. For everything she did. It’s not about getting forgiveness, it’s about admitting all her wrongs. It’s taken her time, but she’s finally almost done.

The only person she has left to apologize to is Flash Sentry. She had been a horrible girlfriend. She had ruined his social life for months. This was going to be her hardest apology yet.


This takes place two months after the Fall Formal, and before Rainbow Rocks.

This has absolutely nothing to do with The Other Sunset Shimmer.

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Very nice.

Not bad. There's quite a bit of strong cursing for an E rated story.

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True. I hadn’t taken language into consideration.

Two months had passed since the fall formal. Sunset had been going around apologizing for all the many things she had done. From Rarity for how she ruined the previous dance for her to Lyra for trashing her performances. While they had all accepted her apology, only a handful had been willing to forgive her, and Sunset understood. It wasn’t like she expected this to fix everything. But she said them all anyways.

And is what counts in the end.

Sunset had bought a new bra, two sizes larger than would fit her, and ‘found’ it while at his place. The next day she had almost the whole school together on the front steps as she threw it in his face, called him a cheater, and stormed off. Flash hadn’t been able to hold a steady relationship since. It was past time for Sunset to make amends.

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Flash stood up, slammed his locker before turning and leaning back against it. “Why should I listen to anything you have to say, bitch?” he growled. He folded his arms across his chest, glaring daggers at the girl.

That was harsh but she had it coming.

“No.”

Had a felling he'd say that. :ajsleepy:

A hand gently rested upon Sunset’s shoulder. “Come on, Sunset,” a familiar, soft voice said. “Let’s get you up off the floor.” Blinking through the tears, Sunset saw the yellow hand in front of her. Still shaking, she reached out and took it. “It’s okay...” Fluttershy whispered as she helped Sunset stand.

At least she has 5 friends to help her through this long road ahead of her. 😇 And flash will likely trust her again when the time is right.

I actually really love this (though I don’t think anything that severe went down in the actual movies) it’s very true to what could’ve realistically happened, not that I really enjoy reading these kind of stories mind you but they are necessary every once in a while

I liked the first half.

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Yeah, I feel like some people downplay what could actually happen.

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