Sleep, eat, fight, repeat.
That's all the emotionless, artificially created earth-colt named Subject A-1 has ever known. Since his birth, he had been predestined with only two purposes in life: to further accelerate the growth of ponykind and to eliminate any threat to Equestria by any means necessary. His enhanced speed, strength, and agility make him the perfect weapon. A weapon programmed to do everything it was told without question.
But that day when Rainbow Dash did her Sonic Rainboom as a filly, she did more than just help her friends earn their Cutie Marks.
She also gave him a chance to change his fate and become his own pony.
A one-shot about becoming more than what you were told to be, and taking control of your own fate.
Cover art by atryl
Why is it complete?
What an amazing Sci-Fi adventure! It is nice to see how you are adding upon the true impact of dashie's first "Sonic Rainboom". Great imagery along with enough mystery to keep you wondering what may happen next. :)
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Thank you so much, it makes me so happy when someone likes my stories!
An interesting concept, but there are several grammatical errors within the first few paragraphs. If you don't have an editor, I highly recommend one to work on that, and wording to help some sentences flow better.
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Thanks for the tip!
It looks like this or that information could have been added to the story but it is....,let's say I feel better after reading it than I would have expected it with a one-shot.