A scenario where a being of chaos and war brought to a place of harmony and peace is not often a pretty one. However, the presence of a loved one can sometimes tame even the wildest of monsters. But for how long?
I'm not even sure how it happened. One minute, I see my four cats playing around in cardboard boxes like they're apt to do. The next... well... they're colorful ponies with crowns and stuff. I need a moment to think about this.
You're a human baby found and adopted by the two most powerful ponies in Equestria. You, together with your little sisters, are going to be the future rulers of Equestria someday. Unless fate decides otherwise
Pretty interesting. Not overly entertaining, but it's always pretty cool to see someone make a "hater-in-Equestria" (or something loosely connected to that, such as this) fic. Most of the time it ends in a pretty humorous tone, as it has here. I'm personally going to give this the thumbs-up, as it really isn't bad for a one-shot. A little short, as most one-shots have at least 3000 words, but it's a good read nonetheless. Nice work.
930812 Thank you. I really wasn't fully awake when I wrote this it was just an idea that popped up in my head.930813 yeah i need to fix that.930940 yes, yes he has.931612 Thank you.931819 Thank you.931898 yeah i was going to make it longer but my brain stopped working by the end and i just kind of finished it quickly.
Oh sure. Like "Party of One" and "Lesson Zero" are for little girls. But what the princesses say is true. In my own words: what you like is your business, what we like is our business, and how we like it is none of your business.
Pretty interesting. Not overly entertaining, but it's always pretty cool to see someone make a "hater-in-Equestria" (or something loosely connected to that, such as this) fic. Most of the time it ends in a pretty humorous tone, as it has here. I'm personally going to give this the thumbs-up, as it really isn't bad for a one-shot. A little short, as most one-shots have at least 3000 words, but it's a good read nonetheless. Nice work.
Some of the punctuation is a little off, but I love the passion. Nice little piece of escapism for what I wish would happen to the haters.
Parasprite has been owned.
Holy shiz, that was fracking hilarious!
Funny little concept. Love your cutesy version of Luna. ;3
that was interesting but a little short but still very good.
so this full deserves a thumbs up!
930812 Thank you. I really wasn't fully awake when I wrote this it was just an idea that popped up in my head.930813 yeah i need to fix that.930940 yes, yes he has.931612 Thank you.931819 Thank you.931898 yeah i was going to make it longer but my brain stopped working by the end and i just kind of finished it quickly.
Was I the only one who thought of the Spongebob episode when he yelled chocolate?
is good wish this would happen to me but i dont hate, I just wana talk to them.
Short, but interesting.
I call for a sequel! this has been a very entertaining 5 minutes.
This is good plz make a sequel
Oh sure. Like "Party of One" and "Lesson Zero" are for little girls. But what the princesses say is true. In my own words: what you like is your business, what we like is our business, and how we like it is none of your business.