Schorl Tourmaline
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Author notes pending. Will be up no later that tomorrow for those who wish to hear my post story ramblings.
Edit: Managed to get it done before the story was approved for release. Please ignore this comment.
Go at your own pace Schorl, we will wait ^^
Hello, Gilda.
Jeans.
Alright interested so far, lets see where this goes
Have been checking everyday since this came out for the next chapter, hope it comes out soon.
Yeah yeah, whatever.
I doubt that.
I doubt he will.
Is she a kirin?
Interesting so far. Is it just me, or does it seem that Pathfinder could either be the easiest slave to tame ever, or the closest thing to a "hidden" threat the society has? Like, one or the other, no in between?
Maybe I'm just hoping that the society ends up with a metaphorical black eye though...
Just as great as ever, Schorl. You have a way with words that makes even the most uncomfortable situations (sexual or otherwise) an enjoyable reading experience. Im curious to see what happens and will follow this one closely. Good show.
Man, unlike most of these types of stories, I can actually enjoy this one as the ones putting the innocents through all of this are not being protected by narrative contrivance to be something other than reprehensible. Makes me kind of want to see one of the mane six receiving the enslavement treatment... perhaps Twilight as some of the art for this setting has hinted that the organisation is aiming to get themselves an alicorn at some point.
The OCs from this story have been well written so far, and I am looking forward to see where this goes, I hope my musings above didn't come across as a request, it was only intended to be an idle wondering of what was yet to come.
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Actually, one of the prequels features Rarity as a main focus of the story. And if I recall correctly, all 6 are intended to eventually take part, one way or another, assuming plans haven't changed.
I suppose that's smart.
You are going to regret that.
Oh. Oh dear.
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Yes, but Rarity is explicitly not in the know about what really goes on behind the scenes in that story, so I am looking forward to one of more of the mane six coming up against the darker side of the organisation.
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I suppose I can't argue with that.
In that case, I really can't imagine any of them being aware of it's nature and joining in any capacity other than slave (Except maybe Pinkie. Who the hell knows with her?)
Still, we have an author with one hell of an imagination, and quite the wordsmith to boot, so I could easily be proven wrong in such a way that doesn't seem out of place.
Anyway, I'm looking forward to seeing how that goes too, if/when it happens.
BTW, good chapter Schorl! Anxiously awaiting the next!
EEEE I have a fear if needles! hides from needles, but would join the origination in a heartbeat,so that I may rescue them still good story tho
This stories pretty fucked up...nice
An aphrodisiac.
You really should have seen this coming.
Oh dear.
So, it would kill zombies.
You worry me.
Had.
Whose.
who else thought that was papa smurf
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....Cannot.....unsee
Am I the only one here who wants to go DOOMGUY on these SOB's?
Good job with the story though, even if it's triggering my angery.
Ooh boy. This is starting to get good.
This is perfect, pregnancy. check
All that slavery stuff. Check
Foxes. No, foxes are needed, not needed but will be liked :)
-Hidden one
Yay new chapter
Woo! New chapter again, one of my favorite smut stories has been updated ROLL OUT MY PARTY GUN
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hehe, thank you for your enthusiasm. Nice to be appreciated.
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You are actually tied with jwj as my favorite dark/smut writer
For first
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Who is this jwj? I might like their work too ^_^
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https://www.fimfiction.net/user/104083/cooljwj
Needs to be cleaned or needs cleaning
That’s my kinda autistic brain at work there, sometimes great at grammar most times now xD
*cough cough*
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Hey, feel free to leave any notes on things I screwed up. My mind doesn't always work right when typing, and I make plenty of mistakes. Things like this help out a lot, and are entirely appreciated.
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No problem happy to help when my brain cells like doing an Engrish
SLUUUUUURP
Hello!
Yay, glad to see this updating again!
Thanks Schorl Tourmaline.
As good as ever Schorl!
I like this,I find it weird,but I like dis
That was quite a twist there
Absolutely loved this chapter! 😍 Schorl’s power is immensely fun, hopefully we get to experience more of it. Can’t wait to see what other scenarios Pathfinder learns to enjoy.
Oh deer...
See what I did there? Huh? HUH?
...I'll see myself out...
Yay schorl!
Not to be?
Dang, another good chapter
Any idea when the next chapter to this wonderful story is coming out?
You ok schorl?
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Yeah, I'm fine. I was just busy for a while working on a project, a visual novel idea I had. I actually put a link to a partially finished version of it (need to add original backgrounds and some art for some of the characters into the game, but the overall plot for the demo is done) into my recent blog post, but no one seemed to care about it.
That aside, I have started work on the next chapter of Weak and Powerless, and it should be out next week at the latest.
Any update? Been over a year since the last chapter.
good thing that not me
In the case presented here, them going extinct would simply be darwinism at work. Start allowing them to rape based on "oh, they'd go extinct otherwise" and you've just opened the door for exceptions to be allowed. Next thing you know, someone of another species who can't find a mate for x reason will do so not because his race is going extinct, but he is the last of his family line or some such.
That being said, as much as they are still the bad guys here, I get it. Not excusable in the least, but there is at least a good motivation behind it.
Now the other members who join just because they think others should "know their place" should receive no mercy.