• Published 9th Nov 2017
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One Last Timeline - StormLuna



Twilight Sparkle and Starlight Glimmer are engaged in a time travel battle and no matter what she tries, Twilight just can't get Starlight to stop altering the past. The battle is growing old for Starlight so she decides to end it once and for all.

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Return to an Altered Equestria

One Final Time Alteration

After having visited many alternate timelines, including one that resulted in a dead and desolate Equestria and then visiting Starlight's home town when she was a filly, Starlight, Twilight and Spike had returned to Cloudsdale, again.

Starlight was looking around and noticed that Rainbow's race had begun, again. She first glared at Rainbow and then gave Twilight a sadistic grin, "So Twilight, ready to see another race ended?"

Twilight reminded, "Starlight, you've seen where this leads, you can't keep doing this!"

Starlight grabbed a hold of the backpack Spike was holding, removed the scroll and levitated it to herself. She gave Twilight a smirk and laughed, "Oh really?" She intensified her hold on the scroll and continued, "Who is going to stop me? You, your little pet over there, Princess Celestia?" Her laughter became more manic as she continued, "Nopony's going to stop me and this time, the changes will be permanent!"

Twilight knew that she had to do something or the future of Equestria could be doomed to something worse than the dead, desolate land they saw and that even worse, there would be no going back. "Starlight, think about this. If you do this not only will you doom Equestria to a horrible fate but you'll doom yourself too." She raised her voice and continued, "For all you know, in whatever future you create, you could wind up being a slave!"

"Yeah right Twilight. You're only saying that so that I will let the rainboom happen and you'll meet your friends." Starlight began to tear the scroll and continued, "For all we know we could return to an Equestria where you are a slave" she began to laugh and finished, "and I'd be the pony in charge!"

Twilight was watching in horror as Starlight continued to slowly tear the scroll, readying herself to alter the future forever and realized that perhaps there was one way to stop her, to admit defeat, "Starlight, I know I can't defeat you but I thought that by showing you that horrible future we saw, that I could get you to change your mind...."

Starlight's ears shot up when she heard those six words come out of her foe's mouth, "I know I can't defeat you." She began to laugh, "So the Princess of Friendship admits that she can't defeat me." Her laughter became louder as she continued, "Quite funny, an Alicorn princess admitting defeat to a unicorn with humble origins!"

Twilight replied, "Starlight, I know you're getting a great amount of joy out of my admission but the way you're acting is counter to everything you've always emphasized. You always wanted everypony to be equal but here you are acting like you're superior to everypony else!"

Starlight tore the scroll a bit further and snapped, "At this point it doesn't matter. Like I've been saying all day it doesn't matter what happens as long as you don't meet your friends."

Starlight turned her attention to the race and realized that she had better stop it or the rainboom would happen, Twilight would meet her friends and her plans would fail. She quickly finished tearing up the scroll and then turned her attention to the race. She grabbed Rainbow in her aura just before she wound up breaking the sound barrier and held her in place until Hoops crossed the finish line, winning the race. She couldn't help but chuckle, "Aw sorry about that!"

Starlight turned her attention to Twilight and stood there on her cloud triumphantly. She gave Twilight a huge grin and laughed, "Well now, let's see where this takes us, shall we?"


Return to a Different Equestria

A portal opened up and sucked the three into it. On the other end the portal opened and they fell on the map. When they saw that not only was the map back to normal but that there was a castle present, both were shocked. Twilight was ecstatic, "Wait a minute, we didn't need the rainboom after all?" She turned to Starlight and continued, "You see, even though you thought you succeeded....."

At first Starlight was not thrilled until she looked around and noticed that things had changed, they had changed in a way that even she never dreamed of. As Twilight was talking she felt a claw on her soldier and a voice say, "Uh Twilight, you may not want to celebrate yet."

Twilight began to check out her surroundings and was horrified by what she saw. While the castle was still there, the map was still there and six large thrones along with a small one still existed, there was one thing that terrified her, the cutie marks on the thrones. They were not the same marks as what should be there but they were all incredibly familiar, five of them were the cutie marks of her old Canterlot friends and on the primary throne was Starlight's cutie mark.

Not long after Twilight realized that Starlight had won and that she was in charge, a powerful wave of energy shot out from the map and spread all across Equestria. With this would bring out the final changes, their change of forms. As they stepped off the map, Starlight looked at herself and then at Twilight and was thrilled by what she saw, she was now an Alicorn princess and Twilight was a regular unicorn.

Spike kissed the floor and said, "One castle of friendship, check!"

Starlight was getting ready to celebrate when the throne room door opened. The first to say anything was Moondancer, "Starlight, what was that?"

Starlight knew exactly what it was but there was no way that she could simply go telling her friends about how she had altered the past to bring about this present. She replied, "You know, I'm honestly not sure."

Minuette laughed, "Whatever it was, can we do it again? It was fun!"

Spike saw their friends and added, "One set of amazing friends, check!"

When Starlight saw him do this, she knew that everything had changed. She knew that with that shock wave, that she was likely the only one who had any memory of the prior timeline. She also realized that this was something she could never reveal to anypony, not even Spike. Deep down though, she was beyond ecstatic that not only did she prevent Twilight from meeting her friends, but switched their roles entirely.

As the five headed into the throne room they saw that Twilight was there. Lemon Hearts pointed her hoof at Twilight and asked, "What is she doing here?"

Starlight replied, "It's a long story." Starlight pointed towards the door and ordered, "Spike, could you take our guest out into the hall while we have a meeting?"

Spike nodded and led Twilight out into the hall. Starlight proceeded to tell her friends about the time travel incident but altered things a bit from what really happened. She lied and told them what would fit into the new timeline, she told them that it was Twilight who altered the scroll, stopped her from completing a complex spell and caused all the problems and about all the timelines that existed without their friendship.

All of her friends gasped in shock before Moondancer said, "Wow, I never knew that our friendship was that important. I never knew that all of Equestria depended on us!"

Twinkleshine gave her a wide eyed look and added, "I can't believe you traveled through time like that!"

Lyra continued, "That Twilight must have powerful magic."

Again Starlight had to bend the truth, "She is one of the most powerful unicorns I have ever seen. I couldn't get her to stop trying to alter things on my own, I had to persuade her to stop. Once she finally saw that what she was doing would destroy Equestria, everything fell into place and here we are."

Lemon Hearts asked, "If she's really that powerful, we can't just let her go, can we?"

Starlight replied, "No, I am planning on taking her in, assuming she wants to learn, and teaching her all about friendship. I think that with our guidance, she will become a much happier mare."

Her friends nodded in agreement as Starlight headed to get Twilight. Once she got out in the hall she motioned for Spike to lead Twilight into the throne room. Once Twilight arrived and Starlight had sat down she said, "I know there is no excuse for everything I did and I'm ready to accept whatever punishment you hand down to me."

Starlight replied, "I've been thinking and we've seen what can happen when even one group of friends never comes to be. We've seen that it can lead to disaster."

Twilight sighed, "I know that all too well."

Starlight continued, "That is why I brought you here. If you are willing to learn, I'm ready to teach you everything I know and you'll have the power to make Equestria an even better place."

Twilight gasped, "How can I do that? I haven't made a single friend!"

Starlight put her hoof around her and replied, "No you haven't made a single friend, you've made seven right here!" She got up and everypony began to leave the throne room. Starlight gave Twilight a smile and continued, "Since you're going to be moving in and be my friendship student, let's get you settled in!"

As Starlight led Twilight upstairs towards her bedroom, she couldn't help but smile. Her goal had been to prevent Twilight and her friends from meeting and she succeeded. What she did not expect though was that everything would turn out even better than she imagined, she never once imagined that she would wind up being a princess. She then remembered how Twilight was always talking about every future she returned to being worse than that last. She thought to herself, "For every future being worse than the last, this one sure turned out fine!"

Comments ( 40 )

8539085

Yes but there is also a different Mane Six.

Even though it was short, I enjoyed this very much. Great writing and excellent grammar. Keep up the good work! :twilightsmile:

8539115

Thanks! :pinkiehappy: I'm glad you liked it.

8539088
Why’d you use Twilight’s Canterlot friends anyway?

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You'd have to read "Celestia's Protege" to understand why. What I had happen was since the rainboom never happened, Twilight never got into Celestia's school but Starlight did and she did not neglect her friends up in Canterlot, she embraced them and didn't skip Moondancer's party....and without the rainboom, none of the Ponyville 5 would have got their marks, well the marks that they did anyway.

Applejack would have stayed in Manehattan, Pinkamena would have stayed on the rock farm, Fluttershy never would have discovered her ability to communicate with animals, Rainbow never would have got her mark, Rarity never would have discovered her gem finding abilities and of course Twilight would have failed her entrance exam.

8539179
Okay first off, I’ve seen the episode, you don’t have to explain what would’ve happened without the rainboom.

Second, so basically Starlight is the one who met Twilight’s friends and ended up being a better friend to them than Twilight initially was?

8539193

Yes, she was. While she was very studious, she also was more sociable while she was in Celestia's school than Twilight was. I didn't want it to be simply a matter of role swapping between Twilight and Starlight, I wanted to throw a bit of a curveball in there.

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And also I find the idea of an all unicorn Mane Six rather intriguing and "Amending Fences" actually aided me in coming up with which element each a couple of them would represent and came up with this list that I am using in a different story.

Starlight Glimmer: Magic
Moondancer: Loyalty
Minuette: Laughter
Lyra Heartstrings: Generosity
Lemon Hearts: Honesty
Twinkleshine: Kindness

8539237

In what I suppose I would call my "Starlieverse" Moondancer is the closest of Starlight's friends which is why I placed her as the element of loyalty. It is probably obvious why I have Minuette as laughter and in my Starlieverse, Lemon Hearts is actually a big sister to Applejack. You'd have to read the chapter/episode "Closer than She Thinks" in "Starlight Glimmer and Friends" to understand why I made her the element of honesty.

This is begging for a sequel because this can not be good.

8539769

Let me think about that one, I can understand where you're coming from and it will eventually get one.

Oh sure it looks like it turned out well, but creating a paradox can only result in... Chaos. Yes I am speaking of Discord, he's going to know something is up when he doesn't have his wafui anymore. Then there is Pinkie Pie, her Pinkie sense will be going nuts. Lastly the EQG universe didn't necessarily change, Sunset wouldn't let this stand. Lastly I don't think it will stick because Twilight's cutie mark is on the Tree of Harmony, she was always meant to bear the element of magic, Starlight might want to watch out, she might have an "accident" that forces Twilight to take the element back...

8539911

Yes I am speaking of Discord, he's going to know something is up when he doesn't have his wafui anymore

In this timeline he never even met Fluttershy so there would be no waifu for him to have, unless it wound up being Twinkleshine (my Starlieverse's element of kindness).

Then there is Pinkie Pie, her Pinkie sense will be going nuts.

She remained Pinkamena and never left the rock farm so she may never have developed the Pinkie sense.

Lastly the EQG universe didn't necessarily change, Sunset wouldn't let this stand.

Given that Twilight never made it into Celestia's school, Sunset never met Twilight thus Starlight being a princess would be normal for her, although in the Starlieverse I have created and will continue to go through in "Starlight Glimmer and Friends" the mirror will never even come into play.

Lastly I don't think it will stick because Twilight's cutie mark is on the Tree of Harmony, she was always meant to bear the element of magic,

Twilight got her cutie mark by that magical outburst that caused her to hatch Spike from the rainboom and that never happened so who is to say what her CM is here?

8539921
friendship games showed that the mirror world was cut off during the time shenanigans.

This turned out pretty crazy... So how's she gonna keep up her act?

8539921
We saw the Tree in a flash back and the element of magic has never changed shape. The other 5 change to match the user, Magic has always been a 6 pointed star. Pinkie and Discord are beings who exist in a meta state, they would know something was wrong, not specifically but vaguely. Also we have the whole issue of the causality paradox, by causing her past to change Starlight prevents her self traveling though time to change things. An event that prevents it's own occurrence is a paradox, paradoxes are usually depicted as causing bad things to happen or the resolution having very painful side effects.
I do suppose it could be a case of an alternate reality spawning, which means Princess Starlight may need to fight herself to stabilize the prime timeline, to prevent it's collapse destroying her universe in the process.

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Magic has always been a 6 pointed star.

True but remember that Celestia used it when she and Luna turned Discord back into stone so I doubt the shape of that particular element really matters.

Pinkie and Discord are beings who exist in a meta state, they would know something was wrong, not specifically but vaguely.

In the new reality neither one would know any different....Pinkamena staying on the rock farm would be the norm and Discord would not know any different, Starlight Glimmer ascending would have been the norm.

I do suppose it could be a case of an alternate reality spawning, which means Princess Starlight may need to fight herself to stabilize the prime timeline, to prevent it's collapse destroying her universe in the process.

The way I wrote this it wound up being Twilight who traveled through time and in the end Starlight defeated Twilight to keep the Starlieverse intact. There was a huge personality swap in the two dating all the way back to her stopping the rainboom. Now Twilight didn't go through the same things Starlight did to cause her to go down the same path but she did go down a bad path at one point or another.

For the regular universe to be restored, what happened in the show would have had to happen. In my story, it just turned out that the universe that emerged wound up being one where the roles were reversed, Starlight's magical talent was discovered, she went to Celestia's school, became a sociable friend and protege and that is why the Mane Six changed.

8539928

friendship games showed that the mirror world was cut off during the time shenanigans.

In the Starlieverse things may happen that caused Starlight to not be anywhere near where the mirror was when Sunset came through and stole the crown....and that is the case in my Starlieverse which would mean Equestria Girls never even came to be.


8540047

This turned out pretty crazy... So how's she gonna keep up her act?

She'll manage. Yeah it won't be the easiest thing but she's not going to slip up and reveal things. If she was to go talking about something like that, her friends and other ponies may simply think she is nuts and perhaps too mentally unstable to be a princess.

8540236
Again, those changes wouldn't have occurred to Sunset's side of the mirror, because it was cut off.

8540246

Here is the thing, the changes date back all the way to well before Equestria Girls even started so her side of the mirror had not been cut off so she would be able to travel back to Equestria but in the Starlieverse, she was nowhere near Starlight when the mirror opened so let's say she did come back, she may have spent so much time trying to find the crown that by the time she got her hooves on it, the mirror may have been closed. I don't remember much about the original movie but how the hell did she even know about the crown to start with?

8540255
Every other alternate timeline was cut off from the eqg world. Every single one. To say this would overwrite it is silly, especially since EQG would have it's own time space continuum

8540236
I'm not talking about her words, I'm talking about her actions. Won't they think it strange that the so-called "Princess of Friendship" doesn't act like what they would clearly remember in their altered history?

8540406

Well you got me on that one BUT she will also have plenty of the her from the altered timeline in her as well so it won't be as difficult as one may think. She would still have the personality from her time in school with the other element bearers....she would keep what she still has from her old self to herself, she couldn't even express that her around Spike because he did not know that Starlight, he knows the Starlight that raised him.

Ok, I get that there are a hell of a lot of paradoxes I never took into account here. I took a lot of all this from the beginning of what I have made my "Starlieverse."

WOW!!!! Despite the backlash, this seems Too easy of a win for Starlight ?

I mean it just seems too easy as it can't be ended that clearly ?

I mean despite the role switch...no bigger backlash than that. Honestly where's the downside in all of this ?

This is a new reality and it's one where Starlight wins....so where's the bad stuff ?

I have to say you got me curious on this alternate timeline thing. I wish to encourage you to keep up the good work upon such an interesting intriguing idea like this one.

8542394

Well I have three other stories that are based off of an ending in a story where all Starlight does is stop Twilight from hatching Spike and then she becomes the one to hatch Spike and becomes Celestia's protege. It is the "Glimmerverse" that I am creating. I figured that since there is a Lunaverse, a Shimmerverse and a Cadenceverse, why not a Glimmerverse. Now if I could get more support and people wanting to write stories that would fit into it, I would create a group for it.

8542703
Well Count me in as a person that wants to see this new universe be created as I can't wait to see what were to happen if Starlight Glimmer was the star and not Twilight. Plus that got me thinking: What about Starlight's friendship with :trixieshiftright: and whether or not it exist in this new universe ?

8542861

Regarding Trixie, in "Resetting Her Destiny" Starlight and Trixie have their entrance exams for Celestia's school on the same day and while they are waiting, Trixie's arrogance and boasting really rubs Starlight the wrong way. Also, in "Celestia's Protege" Starlight tries to tutor Trixie and again her arrogance irritates her. In "Starlight Glimmer and Friends," Trixie arrives in Ponyville as a showmare and is just as annoying as ever. In the Glimmerverse, well what I have developed of it so far, she is no fan of her.

Check out my user page and you'll see that I have gone into pretty good detail about how the Glimmerverse was born and let me know if you would be interested in me creating a group for it and if you ever think you would want to contribute to this new universe.

I know many would hate the fact that this is a timeline where a villianous Starlight wins, but frankly Starlight set herself up for a worse struggle.

8550514

She did but she is quite resilient so in the end she will do just fine.

I love your stories where Starlight is the Element of Magic. when are you going to finish Starlight Glimmer and Friends: Adventures in Equestria (Season 1) ALSO when will we see what Twilight is doing in the timeline? Did she become like Moondancer was in Twilight's timeline, locked in her own hosue with just books OR is she like Starlight trying to contral the world? PLEASE HURRY AND WRITE MORE!!! I'm your biggest fan!

Comment posted by StormLuna deleted Nov 23rd, 2017

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Ok, I've decided to change my mind on what I'm going to do. I am having problems on how to start the "Terror in Equestria" story so I'm going to work on "Starlight Glimmer and Friends" along with some non-linear Glimmerverse stories. It was 3 years between TiE 7 and TiE 8 so I don't think a gap between 9 and 10 will hurt on there, it may actually help and give me more time to develop it so you can expect updates on "Starlight Glimmer and Friends" and more Glimmerverse in general.

Well, Starlight has her revenge, and I hope she chokes on it. Good luck living up to your well adjusted alternate's life, Miss 'solve verything with mind control spells'.

She's demonstrated she's a complete hypocrite, She's just given up on her whole Equality thing now she has a group of friends. It would have been better if her memory had been altered too to the new reality. So she'd have her vengeance but not know about it. That would have been a suitably karmic result.

I feel like starlight f*cked herself over some how.

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The one thing I really should have changed in this was that she wouldn't remember the past timeline. That is the one regret I have in this story.

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She wouldn’t?

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