Imagine being transported to equestria?.
All the infinite possibilities and wonder one could find, why you could even one day become a great hero and smite dragons and demons.
Or more realistically piss away over a decade as a background no name character.
This is the 'legend ' of the not so great adventurer Abraham as he battles his greatest and most intense test yet.
Being a father
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Seems interesting! Keep the updates rollin ^^
I like it
clever concept, but I couldn't get through it.
It needs to be attacked with a spelling and grammar checker. I suspect the errors turned away more than just me.
lmao "found you dad"
...drinking intensifies
Now i just want to see where this is going to go. And how the hell did the kid get there?
im interested in where this might go
I am intrigued. Please continue.
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Yeah, I had the same reaction. There's potential, but without some basic proofreading, it's just too painful to read.
So should I continue?.
I know it's really rough but I'll get better at writing.
I have a good idea of how this should all go with plenty of character development, action is not really my specialty so I'll be focusing alot on the characters growth and maturity.
basically think of every character as broken and each chapter is me slowly cleaning up the mess
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yes yes you should continue writing cause I need more of this
i really hope this story isnt dead after 1 chapter
I WANT MORE, REEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
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Do continue, the only way for you to get better is to write more.
Interesting concept, I'm rather curious about what will happen next.
Grammarly. You need it.
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Yeah, I'd be interested in you continuing it. The character development promise is high in this one. Finding out you have a pony kid of all things? So much potential with this.
i think the writing is just fine! the chapter might need a quick look over from an editor to catch some smaller mistakes but otherwise its just fine.
The chapter was great!
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i agree
ITS ALIVE!
I'm rather curious about how this will develop from now on. And why haven't Charlotte and our dear human hitched it yet.
How? How did I forget to fav this? Missed the update...
Huh. Neat. Your English last chapter wasn't bad at all. In this chapter a bit more though. While there were a few words used that were wrong (caller used instead of collar both sound the same so don't worry about that with practice it becomes second nature.) a few misspellings (ar instead of at which is a mistake any author could make) what stood out was the lack of punctuation in the middle of this chapter.
Lol. Surprisingly your England (Commonwealth) English was pretty good and entertaining.
I wouldn't worry too much about being a perfectionist. Just do a little better at punctuation maybe and get practice by writing some more.
You really did a great job at actually writing the story in English. Looking forward to more.
As a side thought is the adventure rankings inspired from "Kumo desu ga, Nani ka"?
Would love to see this continued.
God damnit! I was just browsing stories and came upon this. I was excited till I saw the update frequency.