Coco is about to lose all of her business because she can't afford to make dresses to sell, then somepony else starts making them...
Breezies are from selenaede
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Hello! Have a review. This felt a little like a fairy tale in its construction, which was interesting. So was the (unique to Fimfiction!) character tag combo. Quite solidly written, and the Breezies are pleasant too. The ending is rather pedestrian, and "minoquin" confused me. But this is a decent fic that just a little sharpening would turn into a really pretty good one.