Seems like it's my life made a turn for the direction with the most ponies. I've always been a quiet guy; never chosen for much or seen by many. I have a lot of time to myself due to the fact that I had a girlfriend that was a complete whore and betrayed me for her old boyfriend. Soooo~ I've been hiding behind my computer hardware, sentries, and inside a mysterious forest. I had been invited to a party by my friend Brandon because he felt bad and thought I should be getting out more often.
Come out of the house they said....
You'll have a blast they said....
Everything will be fine they said....
Chapters (6)
That picture is so....ridiculous. It is so ridiculous it is also funny!
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My pony folder is filled to the brim with ridiculous
977250 you must upload more of these photos
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I promise that everyone will see more of them
I use them when I need a good cover for a story
Aww damn dude, you have the basic image that I have for my upcoming Spiderman Crossover. Well, thank god this isn't a Spiderman Crossover or else I would've had to delete the idea.
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Sorry for almost stealing your idea
woah, woah, woah, there, buddy. intense wall'o'text syndrome here. i enjoyed the story and all, but damn. just reading this gave me temporary blindness.
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No, it's okay. It's just a picture, although you had me scared there with who was in it. Good work by the way, so I'm going to leave a thumb here...
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I'm sorry
I should've known my non spacing would cause trouble
I'll fix it as soon as possible
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Thanks!
I like this chapter.
Despite all the riffraff of love and hate.
But I truly understand how the character feels.
So! I take my seat, and I shall eagerly await for your next chapter.
979678 i shall bring the popcorn
979942>>979678 and I shall bring the nachos
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you want in on this, we got a bucket of Popcorn and nachos with your name on it.
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I'd love some
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finally
Riddle me this batman~
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sorreh
I always finish my popcorn before the movie starts
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I got this for you
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Thank goodness i almost thought i would have to read the greatest Fic ever without popcorn.
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Awww...come on
Fluttershy fudge yeah!! Nothing makes me more confident when facing a foe than fluttters
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The only item in my inventory when I fight a boss
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Forget the knife just grab more ponies!!!!!
Think I'll write a chapter for this story and Multiverse antics today
I kinda feel weird about this one...
I could use some input
That was...interesting. Looking forward to where it is going. Love the TF2 references
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what exactly do you mean by interesting? Good? Bad?...it was meant to be quick and unexpected... 
1058730 It was good. Well written as well. I liked the dream sequence with the statues - that's what was intersting. Possible foreshadowing perhaps?
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Thanks
And I don't want to spoil anything so keep reading if you're interested
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Well, this chapter was decent enough and gets the job done okay.. Might want to space out those paragraphs though, those walls of text can be a little tough to scale at times.
All in all, it didn't really give me much to judge the story off of. It doesn't try very hard to suck the reader in to the story.
You absolutely must space your paragraphs every time a new character or idea is taking place. It confuses the average reader when they're trying to figure out who is talking and who is doing what.
For instance your first "paragraph" should look something like this.
I will report more on the story once I finish reading it.