Pinkie Pie has gotten a job at a prestigious bakery in Manehatten. She moves into the city and gets a lovely little old house, complete with furnishings and old things. She finds a chest in the attic that seems sealed, and upon opening it, finds a puppet inside who speaks to her.
The puppet seems nice enough, and expresses an interest in Pinkie Pie and her life around the city. Pinkie has seen stranger things, and doesn't really question it, just opting to treat her new friend like she wouldn't any other friend. But things aren't as simple as she thinks they are.
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This was surprisingly good! I personally would like to see a sequel where the others try to hunt down Pinkie, but the story is probably best on its own. I do, however, feel that Pinkie would have noticed something was wrong earlier. Nevertheless, a good read.
Not bad.
But I'm not a fan of horror in general, so the story is probably better than I think.
I just want to know what her boss saw that he thought was makeup.
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Through her motions such as spinning her head too far around and her jaw unhinging I was hoping to convey that she was becoming puppet-like. I tried to make it as extreme as I could while not directly giving it away because Pinkie does those things on a regular basis. She was unaware of it up until the end because of Provie. It could be improved, I imagine.
Poor Pinkie...
Actually the style of the story reminded me of King Diamond, seeming harmless but eerie and grim at once as some of King's songs
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Yeah, that's kinda what I figured.
Really lovely! I enjoyed it a lot! Your stories are always a treat! :)
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Thanks. I'm glad you enjoy them.
Well that's not ominous.
While not neccesarily malevolent... That dummy has got some issues that need ironed out before a working relationship presents itself.
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Provide kinda is incapable of sleep though.