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Bright Mac buries Pear Butter in the sand while she's pregnant with their new incoming child.
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8733686
My thoughts exactly.
Alot of "asked" and "said" i've noticed.
I think that the inherent problem with the SoL genre is that people tend to miss the point of what Slice of Life can accomplish.
In SoL, there’s an opportunity to develop upon the characters in this large universe we’ve fostered, but stuff like this squanders those opportunities.
If you’re going to write, make sure you write with a point in mind. Because this honestly feels like you were just writing whatever came to mind, and it’s just sloppy.
Came looking for copper and found copper.
8733817
hey, I'm doing the best I can. Just let me do what I have to do.
I sure hope Bright’s shovel wasn’t made of metal. If it was, he’d get arrested. At least in Panama City Beach, Florida.
9415466
I'm pretty sure the shovel he was using was just a sand shovel.
9415484
I know, but still.
8733817
It's cute and sweet and nice. It doesn't have to have a point. It's just a moment between Bright Mac and Pear Butter.
Seriously, who the heck are you? What right do you have to attack an innocent little short with that uppity, smug, elitist attitude. Of course you're free to dislike something, but why the heck are you acting like this story is some kind of insulting black mark that shouldn't exist. You're a really cold person.
8735881
Ignore that JackRipper guy. He's just an elitist jerk who thinks everything needs to be done his way. Your story was a short and sweet little bit of fun. It's not bad or insulting or anything. It's harmless, and JackRipper needs an attitude adjustment.