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Valentine's Day is fast approaching. It's a day of sweets and flowers, where people admit their feelings for each other and couples celebrate being together.
Aria Blaze, of all people, shows up at Pinkie Pie's, asking for Pinkie's help with baking. She refuses to say who it's for though, and even swears Pinkie to secrecy about this even happening. Who could Aria be baking for, and why doesn't she want anyone to find out?
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Aw...that was a sweet story. I liked it.
Aria really needs to confess sooner or later though...
This had a lot more wit than I expected, and didn't end with a love confession, for which I was enormously grateful. I really liked how Aria was still hugely snarky around Sonata and did the whole thing anonymously, I was hoping the surprise would turn out to be from her to Adagio, just to mix things up, but I think you pulled the usual SonAria thing off better than many
One thing I would say is that the first couple of sentences have a bit of repetition in them - 'lollipop' would avoid 'sucker' and 'sucked' together, and there are two 'herself's in the first bit.
Good job with the story, thanks for writing
This was great. The characters and their banter was perfect. Loved that Marble basically put a restraining order against her sister to prevent Pinkie meddling in her love life. Minor editing issues aside, a very enjoyable read.