I've seen enough failed relationships when one partner tryed to "help" or "save" the other. Tempest's case... Well I wonder where will she bury the body - Canterlot's on a mountainside after all. What Fizzy needs is a psychotherapist, not a prostitute. Easy to mix up, I know. And oh boy, you better believe that the shrink's grocery list will begin with almonds, cashews and phistashios.
Well damn I like it so far couple errors but overall pretty good. i don't normally read this kind of story but overall it's one of my favorite so far hope there is more character development with tempest because she seems a bit over the top. That my opinion on that. I say you've got 8/10 rating for it so far.
You wouldn't be wrong, but what's more fun to read? A romp in bed or 19 hours of psychotherapy alternating between sobbing inconsolably and talking about feelings? I think you'd probably love Cadance In A Minor by Isseus. Go read that NOW, even if you have already.
8736671 Drinking doesn't solve problems, it's just a way to avoid them. Kinda depressing, I prefer to see what Sought Touch is planning to do to help her.
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A couple of edits needed but I like where this is going.
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Something tells me Luna was his previous client...
I've seen enough failed relationships when one partner tryed to "help" or "save" the other. Tempest's case... Well I wonder where will she bury the body - Canterlot's on a mountainside after all.
What Fizzy needs is a psychotherapist, not a prostitute. Easy to mix up, I know.
And oh boy, you better believe that the shrink's grocery list will begin with almonds, cashews and phistashios.
Wow She really needs a kind compassionate soul to help her.
Well damn I like it so far couple errors but overall pretty good. i don't normally read this kind of story but overall it's one of my favorite so far hope there is more character development with tempest because she seems a bit over the top. That my opinion on that. I say you've got 8/10 rating for it so far.
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I'd really like to see what happens next.
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Thanks, Darkstone, seeing to those now.
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Maybe next year. But she does have a royal harem and we haven't heard from Just Fact in a while.
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You wouldn't be wrong, but what's more fun to read? A romp in bed or 19 hours of psychotherapy alternating between sobbing inconsolably and talking about feelings? I think you'd probably love Cadance In A Minor by Isseus. Go read that NOW, even if you have already.
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I'd say that and a huge supply of vodka.
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Wait a few more hours.
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Laconic as ever.
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Drinking doesn't solve problems, it's just a way to avoid them. Kinda depressing, I prefer to see what Sought Touch is planning to do to help her.
Gonna need a period there, dude.
Honestly, this is quite the interesting fic. Clop is nice and all, but seeing Sought slowly pry open Fizz's shell is actually quite nice.