Adagio and her sisters had made a play to gain all the Equestrian Magic they could want. It doesn't go like they had hoped.
Decided to write out a prequel to one of my stories I am working on. This is that prequel.
Cover art by Raika0305 on DeviantArt.
That's bad. Never thought I'd pity the chalkboard
Wait, why should I pity the chalkboard?
Technically, your writing style is good. Top marks for that. Interest-wise, there should have been more of a hook to draw me in... especially if you want this prequel to draw readers to your main story.
Of course, this from a guy who didn’t actually view that Equestria Girls movie
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To be honest, I just wanted to bridge the stories setting from the second Equestria Girls movie. You are right though, it is a bit bland, I could have added a bit of story to this. If I can think of what I would like to add I may change it from complete to incomplete and add more chapters.