What if first contact between civilizations went much cuter different than anyone could have expected?
With Goldfur's permission, an alternate version of the last section of his Cosmic Lotus Chapter 17: First Contact
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Co-author of Off The Mark with Goldfur. Occasional spin-off writer.
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dawwwww
Too cute for words. I could so picture Forestwalker playing with Skyborn, even without the picture.
I actually didn’t initially imagine the two lying down like that, but Foxenawolf had a vision and it came out great. I modified the story a bit to make it work and the result was an improvement!
never underestimate the power of the Dot Warner Effect!
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Dot's got nuthin' on Skyborn! That colt is cuteness personified (at least in this situation).
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As Radiance Point is well aware....
OH FUR HER WEAKNESS CUBS
The only viable defense send in some chakat cubs to entice the ponies
"lied down" should be "lay down". "lied" is the past tense of "told a lie", not "lie on something".
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Good catch! Got that fixed.
You've used her instead of hir nearly every time, on the Pegasus side of the 'conversation.'
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Ack! You're right! Found all the places where "her" turns into "hir" and "she" turns into "shi".
Thanks!
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No problem, dude.
adult-onset diabetes after this much sweetness is defiantly a huge problem after this chapter.
a super good version for this chapter grate work.
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Thanks!
Note that the hardcopy book Cosmic Lotus is now available!
My heart melted when I saw the pic.
a very funny alt. chapter, the idea of skyborn 'tackling' forest was adorable and it fit hir character absolutely perfectly
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Thanks!
Forest never stood a chance!
Combat effectiveness: immeasurable. Do not engage at all costs! 😜
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Skyborn used cuteness!
It's super effective!
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One wonders what other manner of being Skyborns adorableness could thwart?
......
Skyborns eyes fluttered open at the sound of his rooms door slid open, and sitting up in his bed he regarded the small blue figure as it clunked its way to his bed. As the small astartes locked on to the colt, its bolter clicked.
"Heed me xenos. In the Emperors name, I shall smite thee!"
...........................
"Skyborn, mommies back. Its time for... gah!"
"Xeno broodmare, thine whelp has ensnared my bolstered war frame in the foul form of martial art of your wretched race he called huggies and has returned to his slumber. Your intervention is required."
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Even the dread Astartes legion is no match for pegasus foal cuddles!
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"Oh for... look, little metal human... they're just snuggles. Whats with this no touchy thing you've got?"
For a moment a heavy silence filled the room as the memories flooded in,
"I do not wish to speak of it."
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As per the evaluation of the Ordo Biologis of the Ordo Mechanicus
"None have vexed and baffled our order or the Conclave more then the foal. When first observed it seemed small, possessing the poor designed of those not blessed by Null. Or so our Purist and Radical kin would have believe! But all, from their humble beginning as a mere zygote, are already blessed by Null, for life is the greatest machine of all! And in that, we see the foals true might!"
"In my observations, it has consumed all in its path! It has eaten floor lint! A mouse, beetle, then was nursed! They care not what we think, for in their accumulated loss of telomere, its progenitors have grown weak in their apathy and indolence. They do not consume the sweeping! Nor the bug! The foal knows this... and laughs..."
"... How do you people keep getting in our house?"
"My blinders have failed me! Sacred construct of blessed Null, what hath I done to be so forsaken!"
"You put up a wall with a mail slot in the middle of my living,,, DON'T YOU POINT YOUR DART GUN AT ME MISSY! AND DAMN IT LOVE, YOU'RE HAVING HIM HUNTING VERMIN!"
"Would you rather they were in the walls? Also you do realize she's teasing you?"
"... excuse me?"
"Indeed my good mare. My apologies for the misdirection. Although such a pursuit in levity was, in part, done to invoke reaction to gauge your emotional range in correlation to stimuli, it was mostly due to what you said in regards to my species and faith."
"You... you listened in on me?"
"While in public. I acted well within legal parameters of both planet and Federation standards. Rest assured, all irrelevant matters have been soundly purged."
"... oh."
"And a negligible percentage of my person is comprised of, to quote, buzzsaws and tentacles, and latter aforementioned appendages have only been utilized in such a manner sporadically."
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😂😇
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for the record, these are different tech priests. Racoon dog xenos, if you're interested.
I should probably rework the nomenclature, but since people will more then likely just say its a rip off in any case, I might of well claim like Bernard Im not reinventing the wheel and leave it at that
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Folks don't realize that the very nature of evolution and convolution means subsequent entities could technically be called a rip off, literally. But that doesn't mean it's bad by any means....
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Yeah, but in their case, I'm doing things well enough on the nose I'd might as well say fuck it and go all in in regards to my blatant chicanery.
I can assure, I am and it is. And it is by the greatest of hubris and good Bernards tolerance of my hobbyist buffoonery that allows my continued prancing through his playground, giggling and digging up plot holes to break my ankles in later.