Today I graduate high school, finally done with this part of my life, and ready to move on to the next. Thing is, I'm not ready. Im just tired, of school, of home, of life.
It was then that I went to bed and heard a familiar voice.
First attempt at writing a fanfic, so any help is appreciated
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Those chapters are quite short.
One more thing: Colored dialogue is a big no-no in the world of storytelling. It makes things look rather messy. Trust me, I've done it myself once before, and I haven't done it since.
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Im using it to tell witch character is talking
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As for short chapters, im not the best at splitting up where they should end, so I stop when I think its a new scene
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That's why you character-tag the dialogue by showing the actions of the characters that are about to speak.
Don't kill yourself.
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Lets not get ahead of ourselves now.
*which
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SUICIDE IS ALWAYS THE ANSWER