Buck Up, Buttercup

"The Perfect Pear"68 stories ·58 members

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Everypony who has ever been surrounded by the love of a family relies on them. But what if you lost them in one of the worst ways possible?

Being disowned by your family isn't the best feeling in the world. It is a major tragedy nopony should go through. Good thing for ~~Pear Butter~~ Buttercup, comfort is on its way.

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TexasDragon1995

TexasDragon1995 #1 · Jun 2nd, 2018 · · ·

I notice that you're new to this site. Well, i have to say for a first story this was really good. The dialogue was good, the character interactions were great and the story overall was topnotch. I really liked it.

Keep up the good work my good man

Kween

Kween #2 · Jun 2nd, 2018 · · ·

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Thanks! I spent way too much time being paranoid with where this story was going since it was something I really wanted. Thankfully, I managed to get it done in the short time of three months.

I spent more time thinking of everything that could go wrong instead of actually working on the story.

TexasDragon1995

TexasDragon1995 #3 · Jun 2nd, 2018 · · ·

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Heh, yeah, I think nearly EVERY writer goes through THAT exact feeling. Myself included. Of course the trick we all eventually learn is that when we start writing your objective should be that as long as you get the idea you want to convey out there on paper then you'll breeze right through it. All of the little errors and things that you wonder will get pushed to the wayside. After writing the story, then you can concentrate all you want on what you were worried about getting wrong in the first place.

I know everyone is different when it comes to writing, but I'm still quite shocked by how much I'm able to write and improvise on my characters and story despite not writing that often at all.

That's my two cents on the matter. I hope to see more from you