Quantum Shard
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Well, I certainly like the story thus far. Keep it up!
Ditto
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I'm glad you both like what you've read so far! Is there anything in particular you enjoyed? Are there any questions lurking within your mind regarding where this story is headed? What did you think of Inter-Species Observations/Welcome Parties?
Sorry, I have so many questions to ask too!
Awesome!
I think you want "for that long?"
That actually sounds about right.
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Oopsie! I'm sorry, it seems that slipped by me and my two proofreaders. Thank you for spotting it! It's been fixed now.
Why is this rated M?
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It's rated mature due to the fact that I don't actually know where the story, as a whole, is going. As such, the possibility exists that there may be content in the future that could be considered inappropriate for a teen or everyone rating.
Better safe than sorry, right?
This just keeps getting better.
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You really think so? What's your favourite part? Do you have any thoughts or constructive criticism?
Sorry for bothering you, I think I got over-excited.
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Well I mostly enjoy the interactions between huey and the princesses and I think the way you write them really shows the emotions behind the interactions, not only are they well thought out but the just draw you in. The character not remembering who he is, is an over used trope but it always leaves things open for later on in the story, for some flashbacks. Honestly I could see this story going the romance route between huey and luna, as he is the one she trusts and could depend on when no one else was there,but this is your story and I can't wait to see where you take it.
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It is very much over-used to have the dreaded "convenient amnesiac" in a story. However, I thought it was better to have the main character be something of a blank slate, who is more open to being influenced by Equestrian ideals than a person who retains their memory.
As for romance, I can confirm that romance is, at this time, considered to be totally off the table in a canon sense.
Before this upsets any shippers out there, I am not averse to exploring romantic themes later on in non-canonical add-ons to the main story, but, for now, I'm focusing on the main storyline... Not a clue where it's going, but it's definitely proving to be interesting.
I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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You won't need to wait for long! Chapter 10 should be ready later today!
Again I find myself eagerly reading this story. I cant wait to see twilight's reaction to...well twilight!
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Yeah, Pinkie Pie is a strange one, but still very nice!
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The only question now is did Luna do that on purpose to tease Huey... Or was it an honest mistake?
whoa
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Whoa? Is something wrong?
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No. is fine
this fic is getting good, hopefully within the next few chapters Huey regains his memories, and is able to help out
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You can thank Jurisprudence for that! He's been an absolute gem by creating relevant art for me, which I MUST use, since it's just so wonderful. Who knows... Maybe there's more images that will pop up later in this volume?
Selfie with an old style camera lol
Awesome!
Please continue
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I'm glad you three are enjoying the adventure thus far! Has there been any particular parts that serve as true highlights? If yes, then what are they? Basically, if you have the time, tell me everything you're thinking... If you don't mind that is. If you do, then there's no need to answer.
Best wishes,
Quantum Shard
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I think is awesome!
awesome chapter, can't wait to read more of the fic
Okay now that I looked up the word Fugue, It makes a million times more sense for this story. And both the psychiatric and musical definitions fit it well. what with his memory loss and how he is slowly integrating. I must also commend the use of having the protagonist away from activities in the show, shows that you don't need that specific crutch the show so kindly provides to continue moving the story forward. Now I would be curious to see if you were planing on writing it, how Huey would help with rebuilding the town. I'm also curious to see if you will be brave enough to start shifting the shows timeline with Huey's interactions. And I can hardly wait to see how he interacts with Zecora. Keep up the good work.
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It really made my day to see your remarks! Thank you so much! As for chapter 15, that will be coming out soon. Also, if you pardon my curiosity, what DID you think of the insert into "Griffon The Brush Off" in Chapters 4 and 5? Does having Huey on the periphery of certain important events/episodes help or does it look lazy?
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I quite liked it, especially when he was being nice to one he thought was evil at first, and I am a bit jealous of him for being able to confront Gilda for roaring at Fluttershy. I was quite impressed at his ability to give a compliment about Gilda when he heard Rarity and AJ talking during the party. I also did like him trying to help Fluttershy during the party too. As for how Involved Huey was during the party I honestly wouldn't call it sidelined, he was just playing support, I am a bit sad that he didn't go and stand up for Gilda a little more though, especially during the chewing out Rainbow gave her, but it did let Gilda be seen a little more personable. I'd still like to at some point see a story were Gilda comes clean as to why she was so irritable. Because I kinda get mean spirited like she was when depressed and or annoyed. Hope that answered all of your questions.
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It did! As for why he stood by, it was because Gilda had demonstrated she could look after herself. Plus, her temper indicated that she might lash out, which is why he opted to move Pinkie out of the way instead.
Thank you very much for the reply, it means a lot to me!
Kinda hope that he can establish a nice friendship with Gilda. She's a bit rough around the edges, but I think she could be smoothed out
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Time will tell, it always does.
Drop the second 'a' in Pegasi.
Anesthetic.
Missing quotation mark.
*Pinky
Most notably the UH-1 Iroquois.
Dont like chocolate cake? Blasphemy! And fruit cake I agree is disgusting. I'm liking this story so far 😊
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I'm glad you're enjoying it, Dashie! Has there been anything in particular that you really like? If so, what?
Best wishes,
Quantum Shard
Please continue
Will there be any clop involving pinkie
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Strange question to ask when she doesn't appear in this chapter. Why do you ask?
I hate Drill Bit
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He's not a pleasant chap at all. Hopefully, we won't see him ever again, but that's something we shall have to wait and see.
awesome chapter, I like how AJ, Twilight, and Huey had different views on what could happen between Huey&Derpy/Ditzy, can't wait for the update
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I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter! If I may, have you enjoyed the adventure so far? Do you have a favourite bit? If so, which bit?
Finally, what do you hope will happen in the future?
Best wishes,
Quantum Shard