Ophilia Melody is the Silencer; an Enforcer and assassin for the Melody Mafia Family. Vivian Scratch is VeeVee; a gang boss and ex-fiend. Their pasts are linked by love; their present, by violence. But have they changed too much to be together?
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I'm loving the story so far! Damn, I've been wanting to read a good mafia fic for a while now, and I'm glad I found an amazing one! Great job as always! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Also: First!
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You're very welcome. Interestingly enough, the next chapter is already mostly finished. I'm just giving myself a week to wrap it up and get started on the next chapter after that.
He'll yea minnigun! Hard not to feel like a badass firing one lol
Pretty sure you mean magazine, unless you're talking about a sling clip or something.
Other than that, this was awesome. A perfect ratio of lore and murder. xD
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Ah, fair point. Understood and edited. I was mostly having Vivian use slang for magazines -- clip being one of them -- but this is more concise.
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It's the staple of every badass action hero ever.
9521219
Fair enough, it's just an annoying error for most places.
Due to how common people mix up the two, it is hard to see it as anything but an error.
Perhaps 'mag' instead, if you want to use slang?
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Fair compromise. Or I could even have Vivian keep saying it and have Ophilia complain about it.
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That would be highly amusing, and would fit their characters.
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Pretty much. And a clip refers to a strip clip used by old transion style rifles like the M1 garand, not to a magazine, though that's a common mistake made in pop culture and slang. And not all of the older firearms are flimsier than the more modern military style weapons. The aforementioned M1 garand for example. While it hasn't seen military service in decades, its still a very sturdy and reliable rifle ( you can can even use it as an impromptu club if youre using the wooden stock on it) often used as a first go to weapon for hunters, and its .30-.06 rounds are big enough to take down even large prey. I'm also surprised that the ever popular Thompson submachine gun hasn't showed up yet considering how long its been considered synonymous with mobsters and mafia men in pop culture. Plus at 20 ish pounds when properly fitted with an original oak or walnut wooden stock and its use of the .45 ACP, and a high ammo capacity (100 round drums are available compared to the 30 round stick or banana mags most people think of) for a submachine gun, its got its reputation for a reason. The German MP 5K submachine gun using 9mm, the Colt M 1911 A1 45 ACP pistol, the and the SMLE rifle chambering a .303 (a good hefty round for longer range shots) are some other older firearms that are sturdy, high quality stand bya despite their old age. Also waiting to see home made explosives and booby traps ahow up
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Oh, the Thompson will show up later. It's only not shown up yet, because we haven't seen too much of the Family. Believe me, I'm a big fan of the Tommy gun.
And you know Vivian too well. She may have high grade explosives, but that doesn't mean she doesn't enjoy the simple stuff.
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Fair enough lol. They're good weapons, not quite as high a rate of fire as newer ones but they handle dirt, grit and low maintenance quite well, so don't be afraid to let them get thrown around. Heck they jam less than alot of newer models if that gives you any ideas for future gun battles in later chapters lol.
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In fact, the line she'll probably use is, "Clips are what girls put in their hair. This is called a magazine."
9523418
Perfect.
xD
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Haha! Rope is a very situational tool. If you aren't climbing up or down something, having it on you isn't that useful. Ophilia knew what they were up against and came prepared.
So, it appears that the 'clip' discussion has already occurred.
Moving on...
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Not only has it occurred; I feel like it might become a running joke in the series.
America. πΊπΈπͺπΏ
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'Merica!
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