It's a good start, though it could have used a longer build up. If you drew out the scene where Spike was feeling up Fluttershy's by having him explore more of her body or by adding an oral sex scene it would have helped emphasize her feeling of helplessness and gave a more satisfying payoff at the end.
This was nice. I don't think it needed to be longer. It was just a quick little short showing a fantasy of Shy. I think each chapter should be their own self contained story. I was SOOOO happy it was just a fantasy tho, I was so ready to curse Spike out for taking advantage and just out of the blue start sexually assaulting someone like that.
I think one would be cool if it takes place in the human world but it is very lady and the tramp with THIS universe both Spike and Shy are dogs and they meet. lol
I could also see one of a flip where Spike it older to a loli Shy lol.
I think a Cougar Shy meeting a younger Spike, teen, and the younger male decide he want the older woman who isn't use to the attention.
What about one where Shy if a female dragoness and comes across a human Spike.
A super sub Shy and a dom Spike would be fun as well. Like Shy finally confesses to her friends she has been seeing Spike. They ask for details and she gives WAY more than they thought when she tell them how she met her master lol. There are just so many little one shots that would be fun with this pairing lol.
Cute little blurb... hopeing for more.
Ruh Roh, she said it.
It's a good start, though it could have used a longer build up. If you drew out the scene where Spike was feeling up Fluttershy's by having him explore more of her body or by adding an oral sex scene it would have helped emphasize her feeling of helplessness and gave a more satisfying payoff at the end.
This was nice. I don't think it needed to be longer. It was just a quick little short showing a fantasy of Shy. I think each chapter should be their own self contained story. I was SOOOO happy it was just a fantasy tho, I was so ready to curse Spike out for taking advantage and just out of the blue start sexually assaulting someone like that.
I think one would be cool if it takes place in the human world but it is very lady and the tramp with THIS universe both Spike and Shy are dogs and they meet. lol
I could also see one of a flip where Spike it older to a loli Shy lol.
I think a Cougar Shy meeting a younger Spike, teen, and the younger male decide he want the older woman who isn't use to the attention.
What about one where Shy if a female dragoness and comes across a human Spike.
A super sub Shy and a dom Spike would be fun as well. Like Shy finally confesses to her friends she has been seeing Spike. They ask for details and she gives WAY more than they thought when she tell them how she met her master lol.
There are just so many little one shots that would be fun with this pairing lol.
The sexual bottle is building up.
That ending kinda gave me blue balls.
But nevertheless a great story!
1.- Interesting.
2.- Blue balls already? The shame.
There that moral grey area! Too be honest, giving her personality, I would have too!
Yea Spikey Boy Why You No Fuck?!