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Undome Tinwe


Some of them want to use you, some of them want to be used by you/Some of them want to abuse you, some of them want to be abused.

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Falling in love while falling to your death? Easy.

Staying in love when you're firmly planted on the ground? Harder.

Starlight and Sunset only ever learned how to fall. Now they have to figure out how to get up again.


An entry into Oroboro's Sunset Shipping Contest: Journeys.

Edited by Rose Quill and DrakeyC.

(2018-11-06) Featured on Equestria Daily!

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Comments ( 13 )

Heehee, Iā€™m so glad to see this up! Hope others enjoy it as much as I did.

Eeeeee! cute!

Very cute. And the it's odd to see a villainous spellcaster with a decent understanding of magic and friendship, but who goes for the MwaHaHa anyway. I'm kindof curious about him now.

Is this sequel, or are the flashbacks all of it?

This is a fun read. Sunset and Starlight have a good dynamic and fun chemistry. Having them retread an old adventure was a good way of filling out how they got together without an exposition dump.

Ri2

I saw what you did there with those trials.

So...is the cake trap actually dangerous, or...?

Quite fun, especially the Relationship Counselor of Darkness. Though I do hope Sunset stays in the human world long enough to trigger the technomagical revolution. In any case, thank you for this. Best of luck in the contest.

Gut-wrenching, hilarious, and heart warming, in that order. This story simply contains exactly everything it needs, with nothing extra to bog it down (as much as I'd like to read another 50k words where they do nothing but snuggle).

I have to admit that the fact that a dark ritual was foiled because the couple needed had separated and that the dark mage had to play relationship counselor to finish his ritual was hilarious! xD

Really enjoyed it.
Hope to see it placed ;)

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I just love the idea of a villain watching his plot disintegrate because it hinged on his OTP being canon. XD Everything about him was great.

Starlight WOULD make a good barbarian.

Dorky funny goodness.

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This comment. This comment somehow managed to make me laugh even harder than reading the whole impromptu couple therapy session unfolding. And that, in itself, was glorious!
I wonder if this new development will be enough for Sunset to be swayed to return 'home'.
Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed this hilarious tale of yours, so...

Thank you.

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