Spike stays after class to discuss his schoolwork with his teacher Ms. Belle. She comes up with an unusual and sexy incentive system to reward good homework habits
This is super interesting for sure. I love how Rarity has such a dominate position in things and isn't just hungry for cock. THAT is how something like this should be. She is teaching him, making him learn how a REAL man should be and not just about being intimate. I think that is the thing I am really hoping this touches on. That she will teach him to not just look at her, and all women, as sexual objects or pieces but see the person. To fall for someone for who they are not just because they are hot. I want to see her guide Spike on the path on being a good man not just do sexual things and make him a hornball. She will keep him in line and have it not be all about sexual act but intimate, passion, loving, caring, how a man SHOULD treat and think of a woman and not be like how so many men are now a days. Life isn't a porno and you shouldn't treat or think of women like that all the time. I really want to see romance on top of the erotic moments with this story. I think also her making him do ALL of his missing work would be funny as well. Make him earn all the time he has with her. And show it that if he DOESN'T do his work she wont spend time with him. I honestly would love to see a scene of them just sitting down and talking getting to know more about THIS Rarity and Spike and what makes them tick.
Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Sep 2nd, 2018
Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Sep 2nd, 2018
9147915 Yeah, Spike is the first male character of any significance that we see, he's right in the thick of the show, involved in a large percentage of things, and he has a love interest in the form of the prettiest of the six who is just a little too old for him. It's enough to give any shipper Mrs. Robinson vibes.
Whats the update schedule looking like, or is it a (whenever I have time) I don't like to read unfinished stories because sometimes they go unfinished and it makes me sad cause I'm already invested in it, yea I know its annoying.
Rarity here is... rather perfect for how you want her written. It's impressive, what you give and what you don't both speak volumes and were wisely chosen. This has a lot of promise. Plus, I'm a sucker for anything that uses the day in the chapter title
Rarity sighed. “I must saw I’m quite disappointed in you, Spike. Although, not entirely surprised, either. You are a man, after all. It is an discomfitingly common trend for males to give in to their most primal, selfish urges when making love.” Rarity took a box of tissues from her desk and tossed it on Spike’s. “Clean yourself up, and this mess on the floor, too.”
This story is great, so far, but here is a small spelling error I caught. Superb writing, though.
WELP, instant favorite.
Following this like burning.
well it's incomplete I'll have to wait for the next chapters.
This is super interesting for sure. I love how Rarity has such a dominate position in things and isn't just hungry for cock. THAT is how something like this should be. She is teaching him, making him learn how a REAL man should be and not just about being intimate. I think that is the thing I am really hoping this touches on. That she will teach him to not just look at her, and all women, as sexual objects or pieces but see the person. To fall for someone for who they are not just because they are hot. I want to see her guide Spike on the path on being a good man not just do sexual things and make him a hornball. She will keep him in line and have it not be all about sexual act but intimate, passion, loving, caring, how a man SHOULD treat and think of a woman and not be like how so many men are now a days. Life isn't a porno and you shouldn't treat or think of women like that all the time. I really want to see romance on top of the erotic moments with this story. I think also her making him do ALL of his missing work would be funny as well. Make him earn all the time he has with her. And show it that if he DOESN'T do his work she wont spend time with him. I honestly would love to see a scene of them just sitting down and talking getting to know more about THIS Rarity and Spike and what makes them tick.
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Its because hes so hopelessly passive that people can project themselves onto him
...Continue.
Oooh! this is gonna be a lot of fun i just know it.
Well, color me intrigued
Why no SEX tag ?
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My bad, missed the Genre field and thought Porn was enough. Thanks.
Colour me intrigued. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Color me curious, this has left me Interested.
Please, continue, you have my attention.
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Yeah, Spike is the first male character of any significance that we see, he's right in the thick of the show, involved in a large percentage of things, and he has a love interest in the form of the prettiest of the six who is just a little too old for him. It's enough to give any shipper Mrs. Robinson vibes.
I need to have more following this story until my dying breath (not really) or until its finished and favoriting
Not bad, some small mistakes, get yoself an editor.
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What errors did you notice, I'll correct them.
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Small errors with commas mainly, nothing major (in case I scared you)
Over time, this perception of
If I reject it, that’s marks
A vision of nothing less than
gasp or gape
I honestly don't understand what you're trying to say here
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Thank you.
Whats the update schedule looking like, or is it a (whenever I have time) I don't like to read unfinished stories because sometimes they go unfinished and it makes me sad cause I'm already invested in it, yea I know its annoying.
I have no words to describe how much I loving this outstanding story... Thank you very much and please provide us more asap.
Well I know one teacher who's gonna get a shiny red apple on her desk.
Sparity, Instant fav
Rarity here is... rather perfect for how you want her written. It's impressive, what you give and what you don't both speak volumes and were wisely chosen. This has a lot of promise. Plus, I'm a sucker for anything that uses the day in the chapter title
The question should be: How much resistance Rarity has left?
Well I'm going to follow this like it's a firetruck heading to my house.
This story is great, so far, but here is a small spelling error I caught. Superb writing, though.
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Oops, thank you!
Just 1 chapter and I can see this is better written then most other "adult" stories I have seen on this site.