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dracedomino


Writer of many kinks. And if you like futa, whooooo boy are you in for a treat. http://www.patreon.com/Drace

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Hubba hubba. I must admit that I went into this expecting futa-Sunset or futa-Twilight, and though this story had neither, the way those two domineered Princess Celestia was quite . . .pleasing to read.

Non-con isn't sexy

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Hot take, here's mine: Don't read/comment on things that are clearly tagged with stuff you don't like.

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I didn't. I was just commenting. No downvote

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Ok, my apologies then. On AO3 I get a pretty big level of backlash against my harder themed stories, so I guess I'm a little sensitive about it.

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No worries, dude. I love most of your stories. I just dislike the, as you say, harder themed ones. Felt like stating my dislike, but I guess I cam across as a bit of a dick. Sorry about that. Hope the story does well!

9158496 9158475 Reason and discourse is not allowed on the internet. I shall have to report you both to the authorities.

I really want to see this continue.

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Same, it was a lot of fun to write! Noncon tends to be pretty polarizing in the downvotes, but this is pretty soft compared to some of my other dirty deeds.

Damn if you didn't start with the sexiest, sloppiest, drippiest first slathering of paragraphs in the beginnings of all your literotica.

Naturally, I wanna know more about Flash and his interrelations. Am I a wuss for feeling sad about Celestia's precious "thing" with him being crushed now?

Anyways, good stuff. It's snazzy seeing Celestia get reversed on in your stories.

Impressive. Most impressive. I’m not much into the whole non-con thing, but I’d be lying if I said this wasn’t an exception. Call me very interested in a sequel or prequel to this.

Not bad, but it could have been a lot more satisfying.

Would really liked to have seen:
- Celestia forced to get naked, the girls enjoying her body, maybe taking pictures for even more blackmail opportunities
- Twi & Sunset getting at least one orgasm each
- Cucking Celestia by fucking Flash right in front of her, but not letting her have any
- Letting Celestia taste Flash’s cum again, but only by licking it out of Twi or Sunset’s pussy
- Celestia getting an orgasm out of being dommed, either by the girls fingering her or from being ordered to finger herself

Including one or several of those would have given the story a much more satisfying ending. I’d really love to see a sequel where those kinds of things happen. Heck, if you give permission for it, maybe I’d even do my own version.

As Sunset Shimmer held the reigns, she smiled all the wider and laid out the rules. “Every day after school, we’re going to stop by. You’re going to be on your knees waiting for us. You’re going to go down on me...you’re going to go down on Twilight...and you’re going to go down on everyone else I tell you to.”

I bet Vinyl, Octavia, Lyra, and Bon Bon would be more than happy to get eaten out by Celestia.

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