ME, MAIMEN, DOCTOR PAVELLEIRE, BUTTON LEE, JUAN OF YU.
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Well we definitely need a follow-up!
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Depends on my commissioner, but he's said he's got ideas for more chapters.
Harem_capacity == 100%
I wish it was a more attractive pony that had been mind controlled
down vote
Bane?
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It doesn't matter who I am. All that matters is my clop.
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Woulda been a great twist, but my commissioner wanted it to be full control.
Though this may or may not happen later (depending on whether we get that far), I did have one particular pony planned for that happening.
Hmm don’t really like that he gets his comeuppance... oh well there’s still hope Luna manages to get him...
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Was getting featured a part of your plan?
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Of course!
So who's the father of twilights foal
No...not Vanilla....ANYTHING BUT VANILLA
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I think the fact that this chapter is tagged "Impregnation" gives it away.
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You also had twilight mount her brother the next day with no birth control
Good shit man
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Not onscreen. I tag based on what happens that you see, and tag something as "mentioned" if it isnt seen.
But yeah, Dill's the daddy, dilly dilly!
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Alright
I'd definitely like to see Dill taking full advantage of other mares, preferably with him violating all of their holes.
Capitalist pig...
This hits like every single one of my check boxes! (Well, except that he didn't make sure Twilight finished, anyway)
I demand a sequel
You know, most of the time I feel some discomfort with this kind of story, but right now there's this overwhelming haze clouding the part of my conscience with ethics and morals.
I am gonna feel guilty after this…
May the Princesses forgive me.
(Right now I'm thinking of the chances that a psychologist might tell me that this entire comment is an attempt to soothe my conflicted mind)
Great story, you did a convincing job of Dill as an opportunist at an unplanned benefit and Twilight under the influence. I know this is up to the commissionner but I would love to see a future chapter with Twilight going through with the suggestion of having sex with Shining Armor without protection.
Definitely needs more, MOAR! Let's see next month where two friends stayed late, or he goes in a bit early... Aloe could even accidentally self-medicate... gosh there's a lot of potential... and potential foals! :P
I don't understand why guys aren't allowed during operating hours. They would also be easily swayed assuming the potion works on everyone. Just put a sign reminding them not to make advances and in theory the guys would just obey.
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SACRILEGE
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Also, lesbians
Nopony even considered that
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Are you thinking about doing a sequel to this
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I tried to write a sequel chapter to it a few months ago, but couldn't get into it. Haven't done much writing for this account lately (been squaring things away on my main), but hoping to get back to things soon.
Well you have a nice setup. Twilight can expend her panic with Shining while Dill works his way out of this pickle. Then when he's moved into good coltfriend status can finish the run nearly a year later!
Hello The Masketta Man
Are you going to let this story go on?
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For those interested in this story, it was continued and completed here = The Heat Treatment
And then he pulls off a big grinch grin.
Edit 3/25/2022:
I liked the story but unfortunately I didn’t orgasm from it. Maybe I will try another day and see how it goes.