Hell On Earth

EClock Strikes Midnight
Equestria Girls
Comedy
After feeling as though she doesn't have to fear anymore, Twilight meets Midnight Sparkle once again, only this time, the power hungry raven does not seem to pose as a threat anymore. Although, Twilight still has to bear with her.
Human
Twilight Velvet
Midnight Sparkle
Spike (EqG)
Sci-Twi
MorbidTheBrony · 2.4k words · 47 1 · 2.1k views

So, that demon version of Sunset that appeared during the Fall Formal? Turns out she isn't dead. Apparently, she's still well and alive, but the catch is, only Sunset can see her, and living with a literal demon that follows you almost everywhere you go is not very fun. In fact, it's actually extremely annoying.

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Lethal Desire

Lethal Desire #1 · Apr 5th, 2019 · · ·

well written, i like it. Hope there's more to this story to follow, the door is wide open for it.

twience

twience #2 · Apr 6th, 2019 · · ·

lol yes! This was hilarious and I enjoyed it 100%.

Vaguely Demented

Vaguely Demented #3 · Apr 7th, 2019 · 3 · ·

I could see this being the beginnings of the least effective support group in history.

Csquared08

Csquared08 #4 · Apr 7th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Wait, it ended there? Huh. That felt abrupt. Still, this was fun.

Csquared08

Csquared08 #5 · Apr 7th, 2019 · · ·

Oh! I forgot to mention this before, but this is important.

except it had more spike's

You don't use apostrophes to make words plural.

Artistkun

Artistkun #6 · Apr 10th, 2019 · · ·

This is really good. I hope you make more chapters of this story

Sunset Awesomness17

Sunset Awesomness17 #7 · Apr 11th, 2019 · 1 · ·

Omg! This is funny!

TyrTheTaur

TyrTheTaur #8 · Apr 15th, 2019 · · ·

Okay, a couple of things I wanna say
1. This story was HELLA good
2.

Sunset gave Demon a dirty look. "Oh, shut up, you edgy, ketchup bottle."
Demon shrugged and kept her smile. "Okay, one: racist. And two: call me what you want, it's the same as looking in the mirror and saying the same thing."

You have permanently ruined my image of Sunset. Now when I think of her, I think of a racist. You will be hearing from my Lawyer ,Pinkie Pie,.
3. When's the Demon Shimmer and Midnight Sparkles shipfic coming out?

DragonxFlutter

DragonxFlutter #9 · May 2nd, 2019 · 2 · ·

An interesting little fic that ended as suddenly as it began. I see potential for more, but it doesn’t feel like it needs more. Good job!

Snowdrifter

Snowdrifter #10 · Jul 14th, 2019 · 6 · ·

"The Earth's flat," Demon suddenly said.

Such evil. Demon is best evil demon.

Nailah

Nailah #11 · Aug 31st, 2019 · · ·

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/213901/my-little-reviews-feedback/thread/413163/hell-on-earth-review
Reviewed.

Bookwurm666

Bookwurm666 #12 · May 1st, 2021 · · ·

Twilight shrugged. "I've tried asking her but she never tells me. Though, I do have a theory. After the Elements of Harmony saved us from our monster selves, the elements reincarnated them into a ghost only we can see to remind us of our mistakes and encourage us to never make them again," she explained. "I know the same thing's happening to you because Midnight is the same to me as your evil form is to you. Annoying."