9269982 I wouldn't mind helping out with this story, it looks like it'll be a good one and with the relatively short chapter lengths, editing shouldn't take much time.
9270589 Its a good story with great potential and dont let others get you down. Somtimes its just easier to refer to a previous comment to where there answered. We writers new or old need to stick together. So happy writing.
Also. This story got featured. So there is the reward for all your effort into the story.
9270901 that must have been when the page froze i tried reloading the page but i still didnt see my comment so i posted it a second time just to be sure it was there
9271083 No , the regeneration and stuff are his normal powers. Is just his bloodline is super strong , for example Seras with only one familiar is one of the strongest vampires.
The blood and soul of others were just additions to his already op power , some of them were familiars , while others were just an army inside of him.
Good chapter I only noticed very minor errors. The only one I could relocate though was this, "Run, this time we couldn't stop them, they are too many!" That should say there instead of they. Keep up the good work!
9269748 ok, first of all, pretty sure he is generic pretty boy number 3, second of all numbers 1 and 2 served purposes. Blueballs showed Rarity why nobles outside of Luna and Twilight's family are dicks thus not husband material. and, well, not sure what purpose Shiny serves but i am pretty sure there is one. for those who didn't get it, that was a joke.
I wanted to like this story. We need more ponies and Hellsing.
However, as other people have commented, the pacing needs to be slower. I suppose an actual plot would also help - what do the characters want, and how are they going about achieving that?
Keep writing! Practice makes perfect. I want this story to succeed, and I'm willing to help if you need it.
9271699 It does have a plot , the thing is with the chapters being short as they are I’ll take a couple more chapters to explain the “plot” , For now Alucard is finding himself.
Though I understand people’s confusion on that I haven’t get into details with it.
Take into consideration that is been like 10 hours since he arrived on Equestria so far all he knows is that he’s in a new world and that his personality have changed a bit.
The story will look like is pacing fast but in reality I’ll take like 2-3 chapters for a day In Equestria
9271658 Hahahahahahahahahaha. Oh, you were serious. Dude, she might have been a threat a thousand years ago but a millennium of cake and keeping the day/night cycle going by herself has left her nigh powerless.
9271913 Besides Celestia’s nature is that of a pacifist, though she will use violence if need it . She hasent fight since like 1000 years , so even with the power she had she’s way too inexperienced , whilealucard has been fighting for 500 years straight.
9271919 Exactly. Though Luna's command over the night might garner a smidgen of his respect. This is not an insult to her. Luna is best princess but this is Count Dracula we are talking about.
Welp, Alucard is gonna get some royal notice REAL quick thanks to Flash Sentry (aka generic pretty boy number 2)
Welp, they're dead
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When hope is gone, undo this lock. And send me forth on a moonlit walk.
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9269749
haha
9269748
hahahahahah yeah
releasing restriction seals levels 5, 4, 3, 2, 1. the Cromwell invocation has been lifted for limited use until the enemy has been rendered silent.
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Thanks I’ll look into it
9269846
Do you have a proof reader and/or editor?
9269980
Sadly no, still looking for one #hopeful
9269982
I wouldn't mind helping out with this story, it looks like it'll be a good one and with the relatively short chapter lengths, editing shouldn't take much time.
9269986
Oh I’ll be glad to take that offer my friend. PM with the details of that. And the chapters will be from 1000 to 3000 words each
"Violence. If it's not solving all your problems you are simply not using enough of it."
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AYE!
9270096
I'm fond of Isaac Arthur's "if brute force isn't working, you aren't using enough of it."
Is this gonna be canon Alucard or abridged Alucard? Either way, I’m gonna read it, but still, I would like to know.
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is a mix, this alucard will have a sense of humor. but will be a badass with no regard for others too sometimes
Question will this be more like the abridged version or the regular version, both are great
9270138
A fusion between Alucard's the abridged version and the cannon one
i want to see the face of pony and grifon with that scene in their eyes all the blood being suked in and meat devoured until there is no trace
Man next time he fights Nazi vampires giant bloody bugbears will materialize .. and maybe later a few ponies.
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9270129
Alright, Thank you!
9270129
Do you get tired of answer this question over and over again?
Also great chapter.
9270574
Yeah I’m getting there .
And I’m glad you like it
9270589
Its a good story with great potential and dont let others get you down. Somtimes its just easier to refer to a previous comment to where there answered. We writers new or old need to stick together. So happy writing.
Also. This story got featured. So there is the reward for all your effort into the story.
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Yeah , I’m super excited about it , I actually thought of putting that answer on the description
9270605
Thanks for the support btw
9270659
No prob bro, as the teens say.
while im not happy you had him skip the sombra fight im still gonna fave this for the crossover is so spot on heres to hoping he turns somepony
9270894
he saw sombra as someone not worthy of his time, I erased one of your comments, cause it was the same thing twice.
9270901
that must have been when the page froze i tried reloading the page but i still didnt see my comment so i posted it a second time just to be sure it was there
9271083
No , the regeneration and stuff are his normal powers. Is just his bloodline is super strong , for example Seras with only one familiar is one of the strongest vampires.
The blood and soul of others were just additions to his already op power , some of them were familiars , while others were just an army inside of him.
Good chapter I only noticed very minor errors. The only one I could relocate though was this, "Run, this time we couldn't stop them, they are too many!" That should say there instead of they. Keep up the good work!
This is Amazing! keep up the good work!
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ok, first of all, pretty sure he is generic pretty boy number 3, second of all numbers 1 and 2 served purposes. Blueballs showed Rarity why nobles outside of Luna and Twilight's family are dicks thus not husband material. and, well, not sure what purpose Shiny serves but i am pretty sure there is one. for those who didn't get it, that was a joke.
9271518
We all know pinkie is the only worthy opponent for Alucard
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I’m glad you like it! .
9271518
I counted Shiny as generic over protective good looking brother, not generic pretty boy
9271381
I meant it in terms of her raw power.
I wanted to like this story. We need more ponies and Hellsing.
However, as other people have commented, the pacing needs to be slower. I suppose an actual plot would also help - what do the characters want, and how are they going about achieving that?
Keep writing! Practice makes perfect. I want this story to succeed, and I'm willing to help if you need it.
9271699
It does have a plot , the thing is with the chapters being short as they are I’ll take a couple more chapters to explain the “plot” , For now Alucard is finding himself.
Though I understand people’s confusion on that I haven’t get into details with it.
Take into consideration that is been like 10 hours since he arrived on Equestria so far all he knows is that he’s in a new world and that his personality have changed a bit.
The story will look like is pacing fast but in reality I’ll take like 2-3 chapters for a day In Equestria
Though I would love to hear your ideas.
9271705
I see you already have an editor, though I would be willing to engage once you have the next chapter ready.
9271589
Fair enough.
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Hahahahahahahahahaha. Oh, you were serious. Dude, she might have been a threat a thousand years ago but a millennium of cake and keeping the day/night cycle going by herself has left her nigh powerless.
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Besides Celestia’s nature is that of a pacifist, though she will use violence if need it . She hasent fight since like 1000 years , so even with the power she had she’s way too inexperienced , whilealucard has been fighting for 500 years straight.
9271919
Exactly. Though Luna's command over the night might garner a smidgen of his respect. This is not an insult to her. Luna is best princess but this is Count Dracula we are talking about.