Dawn of the Dumb

Princess Platinum Blonde

Princess Platinum Blonde #1 · Nov 6th, 2018 · 5 · ·

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The zombies outside waved their wiggly zombie arms at the boarded-up “no zombies allowed” windows.

Rude.

Hopeful_Ink_Hoof

Hopeful_Ink_Hoof #2 · Nov 6th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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This... uhm... this...

I'm really not sure how I feel about this...

It's entertainingly weird? I can't take it seriously in the slightest. It's like Sonata had a fever dream after watching porn and zombie films.

forbloodysummer

forbloodysummer #3 · Nov 6th, 2018 · 2 · ·

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Ok, so... I don't really like how Aria always gets paired with Rainbow or Applejack. It's got a bit old by now. And in the shipping group, we'd been through Fluttershy, Rarity, Twilight and Sunset, so those two were coming up. Applejack and Sonata don't really have anything in common, but I've liked Rainbow and Sonata together in a couple of stories, so I thought going for them as a pairing this month would be a good step away from Rainbow x Aria being imminent.

Then I found there was no decent artwork of them at all, and so I had to make it. cbear624 has done so many pictures of Sonata, with lots of different pairings, but only drawn Rainbow once. For the styles to match, I had to go with their one picture of Rainbow, even though that picture was zombie horror themed. So the picture created was Sonata from the beach and Rainbow from Left 4 Dead, which created the most bizarre image of a story rather different to either of the precursor images.

Which you then wrote You made it funnier, sillier, sexier and stupider than I'd imagined it could possibly be! The comic timing here is spot on, and Sonata's internal monologue reminds me of how I write her myself, though you have her use much bigger words. This is now the new best story for this pair

Thanks so much for writing a story for the group prompt; I'd almost given up hope of that ever happening!

9275408 Going on the comedy tag, I'm not sure you're meant to be taking it in the slightest bit seriously

Rethewa

Rethewa #4 · Nov 6th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Rude zombies are worst zombies. Like, anyone who's eating you'd better be polite about it, y'know? That's why I put them here, 'cause they're even scarier and yucker than regular zombies

9275408

It's like Sonata had a fever dream after watching porn and zombie films.

Replace watching with reading and you have like totally captured the state of mind I was in while writing this.

Make of that what you will.

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thnxies for arting me a cover

LILDASHIEGRINGO

LILDASHIEGRINGO #5 · Nov 6th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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I don't know what to say about this, yo. I'm just gonna give it a thumbs up and leave it there. Xo

Princess Platinum Blonde

Princess Platinum Blonde #6 · Nov 6th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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9275550 Thanks 4 letting me be proofreader, no one's ever done that before, even tho I'm often leaving comments and stuff of how people can make their stories better.

how the story turned out, and working on it with u was fun.

Tethered-Angel

Tethered-Angel #7 · Nov 6th, 2018 · 2 · ·

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Something about Sonata and zombies just makes sense. Nice work!

Rethewa

Rethewa #8 · Nov 6th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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Many thankis 4 the upvote

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Thanks for pointing out all the places I did a dumb and bouncing ideas around with me! It was a treat, girl, we'll have to do it again sometime

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Thenku!

NightPony Dee

NightPony Dee #9 · Nov 6th, 2018 · 3 · ·

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Gratuitous Fingerblasting would be a great band name.

Fylifa

Fylifa #10 · Nov 10th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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I love the very accurate characterization of Rainbow. That when confronted with a choice between fingerbanging and shooting zombies she picks both

Adorable Sonata and a very fun filled end, as potentially filled with Siren-fun Rainbow is gonna get. Hee.

Also Rewetha, another comedy-almost-clop story in so many days? With Rainbow Dash no less!

Should Majin start to sweat on their throne made of beans?

Rethewa

Rethewa #11 · Nov 10th, 2018 · 2 · ·

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yeh

But would 'Gratuitous Fingerblasting and Zombies not be a better one?

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That when confronted with a choice between fingerbanging and shooting zombies she picks both

It's the only logical choice, really!

… I dunno why that's relevant (Rainbow Dash ), but she just wouldn't be a hero if she let imminent zombie doom stop her from seeing to the needs of a clearly pent-up siren. That's just, like, not okay and stuff.

Should Majin start to sweat on their throne made of beans?

Yes

But Rainbow's taking the dick instead of giving it here, so I think me and Beanis can coexist peacefully.

Productive faffer

Productive faffer #12 · Nov 14th, 2018 · · ·

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New fetish aquired: hot girls fuing in the middle of a zombie-killing fest. Must find more.

Good work btw, well written smut, cute bimbo girl, badass girl both well writen, cool action, premis and an ending worthy of some weird shit I can't think of.

Good work.

Rethewa