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That should probably be "debt".
Despite the spelling and grammar errors, this is a pretty good story. I'm curious to see what happens next.
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ummm yes... I will change that...
I have no proofreader... so... I am greatfull for every help I get
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is it realy that bad? :/
a few grammar errors, But i understand what was meant to be said, so im looking forward to seeing where this is going
Great stuff! You've got me hooked.
The quality of prose and depth of characterization (that you've accomplished in just two chapters) more than makes up for the minor amount of uncorrected typographical mistakes.
Don't get discouraged by people pointing them out, they just pop out in contrast with how exceptional the rest of it is.
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This is flattering ... thank you! But I know that I will make mistakes ... so I am sort of grateful if someone corrects them ... as long as he is not crying about those ...
And to all of you out there ... THANK! YOU! OMG I NEVER THOUGHT THAT ONE SINGLE SOUL WOULD LIKE MY STORY! *Squeeee*
Hey keep it up! Maybe poke around and see if you can find someone to proofread for you. It can really help to just have someone else to point out the issues that you naturally skim over when you reread your own work! I'm enjoying this even if there are a few rough patches. Thanks for writing!