Chrysalis captures Twilight, cocoons her with gooey green scat, converts her into a changeling, then has her lay eggs in her brother and a foal. Additional changeling transformation, rape, oviposition, and other antics ensue.
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And here I thought I've generally seen it all. Part of me hates this, and another part of me is curious. Though I can see how relinquishing control, even temporarily, to a fantasy such as this could be... freeing, in a way.
In any case, congratulations on capturing some of the most sick and twisted thoughts and emotions in existence. That's not at all easy to do, considering most people keep these locked away under layers of defenses (and hence fail to understand them, let alone appreciate).
I wonder how many people forget that they have them...
The only thing it needs now, I think, is for the changelings to truly believe that they're somehow saving them through this. That'd be delicious.
I'll of course refrain from voting, as per the direction. I'm not even sure which way I would, if I were to.
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Vote if you like even if it's a down-vote. I'm not annoyed by down-votes so much as people too unintelligent to vote based on quality instead of content. If you read it and put thought into it beyond 'ew that's gross' then you're someone I'm writing for.
You're right that doing this because they thought it helped them would be a neat way to take it, but in this case I think the commissioner wants to go more for the 'evil is hot' mentality.
If you like this though, I have some similarly extreme stories that have a lot more plot, and am working on more. Most of my commissions unfortunately will get to the juice with little plot though because of my commission rate being high. If it's not though I get too many.
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Well, that being said - I still don't know which way I'd sway. I don't know if I liked it, if I'm being honest. I don't know if I disliked it, either. I just don't know. It certainly seems to do what it set out for well, I'd say... And secondly, I won't vote simply because I didn't read the entire thing, start to finish - I jumped into the third act because I was curious. If I voted now, I'd be doing you a disservice, I think. Though, judging by my own thoughts, I'm not sure if I could come to a firm conclusion even if I did read everything.
I still am - curious, I mean. There's a part of me that squealed in joy in response to all this, and it's one that I don't often entertain... but which I don't exactly neglect, either... Just wanted to share that I appreciate the work you put in, it certainly shows.
So...did Dinky die? Or did she just stay that way?
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She's happily living as an egg sack for now.
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Well that's nice.
I would love a longer sequel to this, despite the scat. I'm really not into scat, but everything else is just just flipping fantastic as usual.
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Well, it's not normal scat. It's changeling scat. Changelings make everything better.
I read the first chapter when it came out, but somehow never saw there were two more, and I gotta say, I need a sequel, like full length CRV story.
A Canterlot Wedding ruined everything...
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New chapters coming very soon, actually.
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Yes, it is one of the first things in a very long list of things that 'ruined everything' for the show.
Strangely there were always still things to ruin the next time something ruined everything though...
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Pretty lit my fellow surface dweller.
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Are you making more chapters soon or not?