Tommy gets hit by one of Rita's spells, leaving the Rangers shocked and mourning his apparent loss. Meanwhile, Tommy wakes up in a strange land filled with talking dragons.
After just a few months of meeting her new friends, Rainbow finally feels comfortable in Canterlot. However, when an old friend from Rainbow‘s last shows up, things get real. Real fast.
This story takes place between KH 358/2 days and Kingdom Hearts 2, Roxas the keyblade chose one falls into the world of equestria where he is going to find the truth meaning of friendship while he protects his new friends from the heartless.
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This description alone was so poorly written and edited, that I've made an executive decision to not read this story. If you can't even put forth every to what is essentially the same as the back cover of a book, them it's not even worth my thoughts.
I'm putting it on hiatus till further notice till I get better I wanna do something that my mom loved and I gotta get better my mom passed in 2017 so I wanna do something she wanted to do so I'm gonna practice
Sorry it was short I'm tired and stuff
I how this chapter is a little bit more than the first
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This description alone was so poorly written and edited, that I've made an executive decision to not read this story. If you can't even put forth every to what is essentially the same as the back cover of a book, them it's not even worth my thoughts.
I'm on my phone I don't have a laptop to work on
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I'm on a phone I should have an editer
I'm sorry
I'm putting it on hiatus till further notice till I get better I wanna do something that my mom loved and I gotta get better my mom passed in 2017 so I wanna do something she wanted to do so I'm gonna practice
Hey guys back for awhile
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Had one then lost it been going through stuff
Ok why hate me I been trying to do something I been going through stuff my mom passes maybe I should give up 😔
Why didn't Spike get to go with the girls there?
After finding this yesterday, I just managed to read this fully.
Will it continue? I am quite liking it.
I do feel like there could be more "meat" in the chapters though.
Like description and pacing
Will Spike be able to Turbo Duel too and be part of the Mane 6's bond?
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Yes I'm I've been going through stuff
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Cuz he was asleep if you remember
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It didn't mention he was asleep in this one though
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Understandable
I will check out the new chapter too in a bit
Managed to read the chapter
It was really sweet
Pretty nice
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Thanks I have the cards so I just put them in the story put myself in Nate in here too
What's pnandej?
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Phantom night Nate and ignoble Knight Johnny I just did EJ and PN for short
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I'll make a new chapter soon