• Published 7th Aug 2012
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In the Orchard - M_D_Quill

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Chapter 1

Rainbow Dash stood in Sweet Apple Acres, feeling the breeze as it blew around her. Applejack should be coming back soon, it wasn’t like they were done yet. They had spent the entire morning together, Applejack doing her best to make Rainbow give in. But Rainbow was determined, she was going to last all day no matter how much Applejack bucked the daylights out of her.

Out of the corner of her vision she saw her orange-coated friend trot up from the farm. She had a determined look on her face as she stopped in front of Rainbow.

“Alright buckeroo. Ah’m back to finish the job,” Applejack said with a sly grin on her face. “My break’s over and Ah’m all refreshed to finish what Ah started.” Rainbow didn’t say a word and pretended to feel the breeze some more. Applejack ignored her and quickly got into position, “Now, Ah went easy on ya earlier but Ah ain’t holdin’ anything back now.”

Rainbow felt a small bit of fear gnaw at the edges of her excitement as she prepared for the the farmer to begin. She had taken a lot from Applejack earlier this morning and if Applejack said she had been taking it easy on her then Rainbow wasn’t sure if she could hold out for the rest of the day. Then again, she hadn’t been sure if she could pull off a sonic rainboom during the young fliers competition and she had done that perfectly.

With that, she pushed the fear toward the back of her mind and replaced it with determination. She would last all day even if it killed her.

“Prepare yerself! I’m gonna make you come!” shouted Applejack.

Then she started to masterfully and steadily ram her hooves into Rainbow. Pleasure erupted throughout her body as the farmer bucked the daylights out of her--she really wasn’t sure if she had enough endurance left after the morning. But Rainbow was determined to outlast the earth pony, and nothing could destroy Rainbow Dash’s determination to be the best.

It went on for what felt like hours. She fought against the waves of bliss that coursed through her body as the farmer relentlessly continued. If Rainbow didn’t know better, she would’ve sworn Applejack was starting to go faster and harder... faster... and harder... The world started to black out as she felt the end of her endurance coming on quickly. It just wasn’t fair, Applejack was far too good at bucking her. Even that wasn’t enough: Applejack wasn’t just good, she was the Queen of Bucking!

Right when Rainbow thought she was going to have to give in, Applejack stopped. Rainbow let out a sigh of relief as the earth pony looked at Rainbow with a glint in her eyes.

“Ya’ll sure are a stubborn one, ain’t ya?” she panted. Rainbow smiled triumphantly back at her friend. “Well, don’t think this is goin’ to stop me from making you come. If one Apple can’t get the job done, we just get another to finish.”

Right as she spoke, Big Mac strode into view. His normally static expression was curved upward, betraying his enthusiasm.

“This’s the one,” Applejack said cheerfully. “Don’t worry about bein’ soft with her, she’s been stubbornly hanging on all day.” She trotted a small distance away before sitting down to watch. “Do whatever ya have to do to make her come,” she said with a smile.

Rainbow looked on in shock as Big Mac positioned himself where Applejack had been. This wasn’t what she had in mind when she started all of this. It was supposed to be just her and Applejack, every day in the fields... but now her brother was jumping in, ruining it.

Rainbow couldn’t help but flinch as she noticed how the large farmer’s muscles bulged with inner strength and vitality. Applejack was strong and fit, but nothing compared to the goliath that Big Mac was.

“Ready to start Mac?” Applejack called out.

“Eeyup,“ Big Mac called out eagerly.

Before Rainbow could protest, Big Mac slammed into her. She tried to cry out in pain as the stallion pounded into her but she could only let out a groan. Once the initial pain faded, pleasure replaced it. Not like the pleasure Applejack gave her either, but bliss magnified ten fold.

She could feel the strength and raw power of Big Mac with every pound. Where the pleasure Applejack gave her came in waves, Big Mac’s came in tsunamis. If Applejack was the Queen of Bucking, Big Mac was a Bucking God!

She was in absolute ecstasy! The soreness and weariness from her and Applejack’s session before was long gone and forgotten. All thoughts were wiped away as the feeling of Big Mac pounding into her consumed her consciousness.

Another eternity passed in a blink of an eye and the stallion stopped. In front of him sat a large, red apple. He let out a contented sigh, picked it up, and placed it in a barrel filled with other large apples.

“Thanks for the help Mac,” Applejack laughed. “Ah’ve been tryin’ to get that sucker down from that tree all mornin’. If Ah didn’t know any better, Ah would think it wanted to hold on until the last moment.”

The two farmers collected the full barrels of apples and left Rainbow Dash alone in the orchard. She sighed contently and shook out her leaves. Noticing that the sun was still a hoof off of the horizon, she let out an irritated groan. If Applejack hadn’t cheated and gotten Big Mac to help her, she knew she could have made it until sunset.

‘Oh well,’ Rainbow thought, ‘there’s always next year!’

The sound of crunching grass caught her attention and she noticed there was a pony standing about ten feet from her. The timid pegasus there was standing tall and glaring at her childhood tree-friend.

“I don’t know how you did it, but I will be a tree myself someday,” she stated firmly in a loud whisper.

With that she turned and flew off.

Comments ( 37 )

Got another bite from the Random Bug. Don't know how these ideas get in my head, but they do and I just have to write them. :rainbowlaugh:

One hour of writing and a quick edit by my friend Peregrine Caged and it is here on FIM. Hope y'all enjoyed reading it as much as I had writing it!

At last! It finally posted!
Excellent!

quill
you sucks.
I can't read it right now.
Right as I have to go outside.
you post a new story.
damn you.


How work on the art coming? Still planing on selling at what ever con it was?

Rainbow Dash is best tree. :rainbowlaugh:

1047197 If you figure it out, tell me. I don't know what the hell I wrote! :rainbowlaugh:

1047231 Only a day and a half. New record for longest wait!

1047240 I timed it just so you can't read it right away! :trollestia:
Art is going well, but I decided to not buy a booth until I have a good buffer of pics. I decided it would be a bad idea to try and rush it so I can make the con. Maybe the next one! :ajsmug:

As the story developed (if that can even be said), I thought I knew what the big :twistnerd: would be. But then it stopped making sense, until Fluttershy revealed it at the very end.

Bravo good sir. Bravo. :rainbowlaugh:

:rainbowlaugh: Oh god, my sides! That was so wrong on so many levels. It was at least 20% more wrong.


And then Fluttershy was a weeping willow.:yay:

1047269
Story's been up for about 25-30 minutes. Already has...51 views. Yup, experiment is a rousing success.

Dafuuuuuu... :rainbowhuh:
The Random/Everyone plus the apparent topic alerted me it would be a not-what-it-looks-like ending, but I was NOT prepared for that. :rainbowlaugh:

HO LE BUCK that was funny :rainbowlaugh:

i don't what to say.
wel, i hope my 5 spikes and the green thumb tells it: :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

So that just happened. :coolphoto:

DUH FUQ WAS THAT?!?!

The fuck.... did I just read???

Oh well, it was funny, but......

What the fuck? :unsuresweetie:

Rainbow Dash gets bucked
Rated Everyone


I must see where this goes/

Oh, look. An obvious fake clop with an Everyone rating that is bound to get featured.

:flutterrage:FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU...

1047269 HA! and only 48 minutes later, I'm able to read it. Your plan was only a slight setback.

Which con was it was you wanted to have a booth at?

Poor Rainbow Dash, she didn't deserve to be a tree.

:pinkiecrazy: Brain.exe has stopped worki-

At first "Clopfic"
Reading "Clopfic"
More reading "Clopfic"
Ending "What the hell? *see's rating* uh...what the fuck?"
Not the mental image I had. Damn Internet.

kinda cofused at beginning. is she getting bucked? is she getting "bucked"? :applejackunsure: Then fluttershy's line made it all clear.:yay:

I have no idea what just happened

Incidentally, as soon as AJ said she was finished with her break, I knew exactly what was happening. The Fluttershy bit was completely unexpected, though, and had me fighting not to laugh hysterically in the middle of the office. Ok, the entire piece had me fighting not to laugh, but Fluttershy nearly had me lose it.


1047530
I saw your avatar and name and my first thought was "Why is an A-10 reading fanfiction?":rainbowlaugh:

Just goes to show you, there are no lengths Rainbow Dash will not go to give Applejack a challenge.

Why was this marked as read? I hadn't read this? Now that I have, I must say it was entertaining. I almost missed it.

Wait... Tell me if this is right.
Rainbow turned into a tree (Celestia knows how) and Applejack/Big Mac bucked her until random apples fell off her leaves? Then Fluttershy came over and threatened her?

Sounds legit. :pinkiehappy:

Oh...I see what you did, Quill. Oh look I finally read it!

I've only felt this confused once before, and that was while beating the End in MGS3. A professional sniper would never make those mistakes! Never!

So many implications, various interpretations...in the end I screamed because I knew I was about to be lol'd. I did say to myself that this was coming when I read the tags. Seriously tho, you're better than me when it comes to random :pinkiehappy:

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

You silly pony. :|

Gee, and I thought my idea of shipping the Golden Oaks Library with Bloomberg was crazy.:pinkiecrazy:

What?
I don't understand.
I know what happened, but...I don't understand.
What?

So, why is Rainbow Dash a tree? Why does getting kicked feel good to her? And the Apple family isn't in on it?

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