You think you know what happened at the Canterlot wedding!?
Because everything you think you knew -was a lie!
You can't trust your eyes this time, when Twilight Sparkle will find out the truth, about the ones, she trusted the most.
An alternative version of the episode, which will deviate more the further you go, promise ;)
A bit of drama and a LOT of cheesy romance in between~ and a fair share of dark humor at the end ;)
My first "PonyTale". A short series of unusual & (mostly) unrelated story's.
Enjoy ♥
(the comments were meant to go before/after the story, so don't be too confused^3^)
Chapters (7)
Story line is great, but the grammar needs some work. It was hard to read at times because of bad grammar.
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Thanks..
English isn't my first language.
Also the story is darn old...
PS. Also i reinforced a lot of my 'school basics' during online play and ppl never bothered to correct my "accent". Plus German roots mislead me a lot since we tend to slap together words.
"Beautiful" I spelled for a long time with LL. Cause something is "fuLL of beauty"... Hands beautifulL.
I learned a bit since and got some tools to help me with that… I hope... So future stories should be a tad easier to read.
Of course a proof reader has yet to be hired :/
Quite a different take on that story...but a very nice twist, and ending. BRAVO !!!
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Thanks ^^ Appreciate it!
I always found it rather suspicious that Celestia wouldn't notice!
Unless... she knew! D:
So, what exactly happened to the real Cadance when the changelings swarmed her?
wha... what the hell does that mean? is some kind of zen riddle?
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I guess it should be 'state of concern' :) [fixed it /alongside a few more typos]
My Englisch was rather rudimentary back then, and I lacked tools for additional spell-checking, though those kinda errors often happen (to me) during re-writes... (sorry about that^^")
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Something very bad! As bad as 'PG' allows :)
I assume they put her in a cocoon for a while and later throw her in jail - making her eat nasty slimy mushroom stew >3<