Fluttershy never liked storms and she still doesn't, unfortunately for her there's a big one coming.
Cute Flutterdash fluff at it's finest.
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Xavier271
I love Flutterdash, best ponies, best ship.
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The romance bit felt kinda tacked on at the end, but otherwise this was a good read. Have a Thumbs Up!
You could do away with the confession at the end and the story would be stronger. They could have just cuddled and left things suggested and not said.
Or go with a longer, more powerful build-up that will carry more weight.
Either way, the rest was fine, if a tad rushed feeling.
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Thank you for the feedback, I'll keep it in mind in the future :D
It's a nice, simple, pure fluff-fic. Very reminiscent of what you'd see in the early seasons. Just wish it had a little more detail to liven up the rather straightforward delivery of the plot.