I like writing about the worst day of a character's life; it lets us see the mettle inside. (Pronouns: RB/20 )
Thunderlane opens the Canterlot Times newspaper one morning to find out he's been voted 'hottest stallion.' He's not happy about this. He's even less happy when every unattached mare in town congregates on his front porch.
And he's even LESS happy when Princess Luna blasts his front door off its hinges and barges in, looking for him.
(Inspired by a Discord chat. One of Luna's lines courtesy Zubric. Thanks, all!)
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Ok
what did I just read
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Essentially what I was going for. Thanks!
I was wondering why he kept refusing her! Seriously, if there's a cake in front of you, take a piece! Neat little story!
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Thanks!
He doesn't want Luna!? He'd have to be-
> reads story
Oh... Well okay then!
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Thanks! I respect your criticism particularly. I've read many of your comments and stories.
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The story is very funny! I just love ponies very much and everything related to them. Once upon a time, one pony write my assignment for me, or maybe it was just my friend. If I really see a pony instead of people, is this normal?
I'm a simple reader. I see Thunderlane I like. :)
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Thanks! I hope you liked my version of him.
This was HILARIOUS! Thanks for writing this!
Just the thing to make me feel happy when my internet's choppy.
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Thank you! I live for feedback.
Dark Tower series fan huh?
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You say true, I say thank ya.
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Said it before on site, so I'll say it here: Its Stephen King's magnum opus. But its Stephen King's magnum opus, so... yeah
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Hile, fellow gunslinger!
The Dark Tower displaced "Lord of the Rings" as my Number 1 fantasy cycle.
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Berserk for me.
Its like this
But if it was good... and leaves you in the same state in the end. If you walk away from Berserk not miserable, you did something wrong.
And yes, I am aware they are going for a happy ending unlike Game of Thrones, but bubbly baby Jesus in his powder blue pram is it agony getting there
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Today I learned. I will look that up!
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I'd... okay, bit of a spoilier... You get to a part where there a big hand and five clive barker love children. Yeah... I'd skip that part
Also, watch the old anime, not the new one. Because... just, trust me. You'll thank me for it.
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DO NOT LET YOUR LITTLE ONE IN THE ROOM WHILE ITS ON! And you may want to hug them after... or a dog. Or a teddy bear... Or all three at once.
Admit Thunderlane, you fall for Celestia.
I inspired the story? I don’t remember the conversation believe it when I going to have goldfish memory when it comes to discord chat
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We were discussing possible ships. When we got to Luna you said something along these lines:
I added "FROM THE DEEPEST DEPTHS OF HELL!" as a Disenchantment homage.
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This was great! Feels like it needs an epilogue chapter or something though, maybe?
Now I'm left wondering: Is he actually gay...or did he just blurt that out so to deter Luna?
...either one is still pretty hilarious when you think about it.
So... was Rainbow trying to stop Rarity because she knew?
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Ha! I never thought of that.