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Now all we need is one with Sweetie Belle being tied up.
That was really quite well done.
Did something go missing here? Feels like it. That was copied and left as is, by the way, no extra spaces added and such.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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Missing line break. No text.
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It's from a comic series, shouldn't be too hard to look up. Artist is FearingFun.
Jesus H. Fhqwhgads, this is on another level entirely.
That was very, very nice. Sisterly love is something truly wonderful.
Very nicely done. I hope there'll be a sequel with THAT ending...
Also...Rarity got to fall asleep with her ass still filled out, didn't she? Could be an interesting start to the next chapter...
wtf second incest third w.t.h
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the Irony of having a problem with incest when your profile picture features vore between underage characters is astounding
Shameful Wank
It's a bit weird in its execution but I'm a sick bastard... So, 6/10
Great more. Are we to expect a sequel, where Sweetie becomes the toy and Rarity is mistress.
Oh Rarity
!!!
Simply adorable
.
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hey eating and sex are two different things buster deal with it
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exactly it has nothing to do with sex
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You clearly have no idea what Erotic means
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This was my favorite line.
Also, this exchange...
Contest judge, thoughts.
Oh.. This is really nice.
I could talk about how the psychic distance was a little claustrophobic at times or how some of the word phrasing was a bit odd here or there.. Maybe even how I'd argue a single PoV would've been better(although using scene breaks is greatly appreciated for switching PoV!)...
But that would all betray the fact I just liked the fic. It's very close. Very intimate. It uses simple language to convey a lot of complex feelings and ideas. For that I have a lot of respect. You've made me want to see more of these two, written by you.
I'm becoming quite a fan of Raribelle I just realized...
Good work.
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This is a commissions account, so if that's the case-
That being said, I was also going to write a sequel/more if this placed/honourable mentioned. That was a less daunting prospect back before there were, like, 100+ entries though hahaha.
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Ahahaha!...
So you know I want more and you're suggesting doing a follow up if you win/get an honourable mention...
Are you trying to bribe me?
I mean it might work. No one's ever tried before. Not sure how low I'll stoop!
Nah, probably not..
definitely not. don't ban me Shake
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Pfft. "I promise to write a better sequel" seems like a very lame bribe after this contest resulted in about 15% of all stories submitted last month.
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Quality over quantity.