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Lots of proofreading still needed. But, still good. What's that armguard thing from?
You forgot that the magic absorbing sword is deadly for magic users to touch because unless you are its original owner only a person with no magic can touch it and not be drained dry.
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I'm was actually saving that part for a little later
Grammar mistakes all around... please proof read it at least once or twice before uploading. I love this story, but these mistakes almost made me shut down my pc and go read a book instead... ( DONT MAKE ME DO GOOD THINGS!)
Great story, can't wait for the next one!
Bean's
Now in rainbow's face not no
Ah doesn't need to be capitalized
You need to use too instead of to.
And it should be try to take my sword.
So.... Rainbow punch him into a crater and he does nothing but a soldier follow orders and he goes all chuck norris ? Why ? Because Rainbow is female and he can’t hit females ? Or is it because she is an element of harmony and he pussys out ? I don’t mind him being a pacifist, but then don’t make exceptions to make him look cool, don’t pull the Woman can’t be touch even do they try to kill you shenanigans.
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it's because she's Fluttershy's friend and he does know who she is
From which anime or game does this equipment come from?
Oh his brother was displaced.
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Both of Asta's brothers are displaced. The story for his older brother is my first story and the story for his younger brother is my second newest one
This was so well written for the first couple chapters. Did the editor quit or something?
i fear no man but that thing it scares me
So one of his brothers is the FREAKING GOLDEN SAGE???
and the other brother?
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The other brother and youngest of the three is the Smiling Monster of the Everfree