Sunset Shimmer doesn't have time to waste waiting for Rarity to be ready, and Applejack is getting closer to finding her pressuring and planning on taking what she wants from Rarity.
Dark/Non-con Spoiler Note: This is dark and non-con just because the joke is dark and non-con, but the story itself is not actually dark and doesn't have any non-con in it.
I can totally see this happening, somehow. XD
Keep up the good work. :)
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Hehe, see this happening, that's kinda mean to Sunset! :D
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But it's true! XD
COMPLETE misreading of the situation.
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A very bad misreading! :D
Flawless Victory!
https://tenor.com/view/rainbow-dash-laughing-my-little-pony-rofl-teary-eyes-gif-5292658
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Hehe.
Sunset needs to learn to bluff better.
Not quite my cup of tea. The pacing's a bit choppy and I'm not really feeling anything other than a "Oh noes, sexual innuendoes: jokes.
Also a few repetition errors here n' there
Example
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Hehe, well yes, those were the jokes.