Paladin Palkia, is the last being of his universe left after a calamity occurred and wiped out all of the humans and Pokémon in it, but before he was destroyed, he opened a spatial portal and finds himself in the world of Equestria. How will this legendary beast fare in this world, and will what happened in his world, happen again? And... Was he the only one to make it out? And, why does he look like a pony?
I do not own the cover art by the way.
hale lord helex
Helix is dead... Ssooooooooo *holds up middle fimger to helix's grave* FUCK YOU BITCH!!!!
Coverart sauce: https://www.deviantart.com/renepolumorfous/art/Pony-Diamond-Pony-Pearl-319340062 (SFW)
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HOW DARE YOU! BEGONE VILE SINNER!
*uses spatial rend. Genji style* NO U!
I like the concept of the story, but it seems kind of rushed to me. The lack of details also is a bit of a problem, I just can't get a good pitcher of the story in my head.
Yeah, its best if you just leave a link like that, that way it doesnt interupt the flow of the story more than it already would
Ok, so this is either philomina, or ho-oh
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Hmmm thanks for the feed back. I'll keep this in mind.
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And for this..... Hehehehehehe
This is a great story. I like it!!! Waiting for the next chapter now.
I know you haven't explained it yet, but imma say this is twilight's fault
Bro I'm gonna be straight with you, (Oh if any one wants to know, its a spoiler, just be warned) More or Less
is there going to be more?
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Yes but I'm still working on the chapter. My mind has just been elsewhere trying to update stories on my Quotev and Wattpad accounts so it's kinda hard to keep it all in calenders style and with high school it gets harder. I try to update when I can sorry if you have to wait awhile. I promise I will get a chapter out as soon as possible.
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Did you open the picture in a new tab first?
Right click on the picture you want and select open in new tab, when the picture is in a tab by itself you use the URL of that tab for the link.
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I also have a wattpad account. I know it might be rude of me, but would you like to have a look at my story?
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Sure! Whats the account name?
So you know
alicorns don't have hands
I really liked this story, a little fast paced on the first chapter, but this is good, I love to see more
Very good story, So where's Next chapter ?
my sister Crecelia ?
Do you mean, my sister Cresselia ?
Good story, would like to know if or when it gets finished though.
Do you intend to continue?