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CROSSOVER KING


Sometimes, I remember it one way. Sometimes, another. If I am going to have a past, then I prefer it to be multiple choice.

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That was a good read :rainbowdetermined2:

I think it perfectly done and I only saw one major problem with the grammar

To say that the experience was agonizing for Nightmare Moon would be a total understatement. Her armor had already started to melt and her exposed parts were burning very intensely. In fact, some of the had already become second degree and were dangerously close to reaching third degree.

I would suggest them instead of the
But besides that it was pretty good to me at least

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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

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Okay, I fixed it. Thanks for the reminder! :twilightsmile:

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If you're a Transformers fan, then I highly recommend that you also check out the crossover story I'm currently writing. :scootangel:

I know next to nothing about ghost Rider (minus what I learned about him in his death battle against Lobo) but this was a great little tale

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Glad you enjoyed it. :scootangel:

I don’t know much about the character either, but his ability set in Death Battle was really cool and I tried to use it as creatively as possible in order to make the battle against Nightmare Moon an entertaining one.

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I'm happy Luna is getting a chance ^^

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Me too. :twilightsmile:

Even though this is a story that heavily depends on action, there just had to be some genuine emotion and character development.

Um, what? Nightmare Moon loves living in the Forbidden forest. In fact that's where her old castle is. This princess of theirs is a weakling. No wonder her people are rebelling against her.

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If she had forced her soldiers to search Everfree, then the rebellion would've surely escalated due to how much they fear the beasts living there.

Ghost Rider then attacked Nightmare Moon a couple of times with the flaming chain, but her shield still protected her. She, in turn, emitted a blast of magic from her horn towards the rider, which sent him flying to the front gate and he crashed into his motorcycle, utterly stunned. She continued to press her attack by blowing up the castle roof and dropping several big pieces of rubble at the rider, but he destroyed them all by emitting bursts of flame from her hands like flamethrowers. He then got back on his bike and began to ride circles around Nightmare Moon's shield. This helped him to not only avoid getting hit by her magic blasts, but also create a ring of fire around her, which grew bigger and stronger with each lap.

If this was the actual ghost rider she would be dead in seconds lol

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I still liked it though it was a good Oneshot

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Thanks. Really appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

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Hope you like my other stories as well.

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