Death gave a Women a chance to be Reborn, All Memories of Her Past's Intact. She Accepted. Being Reborn In Equestria, Much from her past will come back to haunt her. What will happen? Read, and Find Out.
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First time I've gotten a comment like this. Heh, more? Not entirely sure if I can yet, as I've got some of my own stuff to do. I'm doing a whole lot at once and it can be irritating. Art, Animation, Writing are currently what I'm working on, but I've also hit a massively irritating / annoying / tedious task. Fixing 'some' stuff in the chapters, and getting everything re-listed in doc's to keep track ( Chara's abilities, bit count, ammo count, ect ). It'll take hours of boring AF work. I hate boring work. But don't worry, it'll be done. It'll just take some time along with having to figure out where to go from here.
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ok
I'm shaking in anticipation for more. Clop mostly though
9862121
Shattered, long time, no see. It has been a while, hasn't it? Hope you're enjoying my story here, after all, I'm putting a lot into it. New pic? I remember your old one was a standard Thestral from all over the place. Made that yourself? Or had an artist make it for you as a commission? I'm curious, though, I do hope that anyone who reads and likes it, gives it a thumbs up. As that does help me keep track of how many enjoy the story, anyways, I the next chapter will take some time, unfortunately. I have to head butt a belt sander ( If you get the reference, good job, you've played a really good game ) and get some irritating shit done before I can really work on the next chapter. Hope you've had a good life so far, Shattered, and I hope you continue to do so. Have a nice day.
9862587
You have a good day too, you're lewd as some of my RPs can get, and no doubt we both share at least a few fetishes. I did get this new PFP of mine commissioned. I am also sorry, but I don't get that reference.
9862613
Oh? Borderlands 2. That's the reference, and that's all I'm telling, as I am NOT going to spoil that game for anyone. And quite frankly? I'm probably more 'lewd' than you'd think. Though... I've changed some bits, but Chara there? Just about Self Insert, but not entirely, they lack some of the lesson's I've learned, but one of them, which was shown in chapter 7, I learned myself... the hard way. You might be able to figure it out. That one lesson, I couldn't go through with writing through the perspective I had before I learned it. If I did, it would've haunted me for a long time.
Again, Hope you're enjoy the story, though, I'm currently working on getting the stuff listed and done, another chapter that won't be a part of the main story, an info chapter that'll show what Chara has at what chapters and the stats of her and other characters will be posted soon. Probably in a week.
9862646
Okie dokie lokie! I can only hope it gets lewder, and (one can hope) Batponies show up again :3
Have you been playing AQW recently?
9903206
Not recently no, but from my own experience previously. It took me WEEKS of playing non stop just about to level up to level 35. I tended to have multiple accounts and create characters based on ones I liked at the time, Mostly female, but some male. More so if they're badasses. Because seriously, Griffin The Griffin IS A BADASS!
9903235
If you need help just call, lvl 85 with Lightcaster Immortal Dark Caster and Lord of Order, there was some pretty big lore events recently
9903237
Wow, that's nice. Though, I Intend to prefer doing stuff myself. But thanks for the offer. I'll have to check the events as I'm curious as to what's been going on. Though, I've been more into dragon fable recently of the games from Artix Entertainment and I even have a DA for all my characters on that game.
9903257
Always nice to have help
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By the way, how'd you find my story?
9903261
I am liking so far
9903261
I found this story on the similar tab of one of the stories I am reading
When is the next chapter coming out?
10076553
I've had a creative block recently. So.... might take a while. I dunno. I can't play the one game that got me inspired / gave more inspiration for this series anymore as it kills my pc. So.... yeah... could take a bit.
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Understandable have I nice day
Love the story so far!!!
10107817
Nice to hear. Unfortunately, I'll have to.... redo, bits of it. Damn idiot me forgot to write down the equations for the stats and in some cases didn't even use equations. Like a moron. Plus, lacking the game that gave me said inspiration is annoying. But... I may've found a replacement on that front. Might not be as good, but here's hoping, right?
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What game are you lacking?
10455056
I can't play the game S.T.A.L.K.E.R Call of Pripyat with the MISERY and TAZ mods, which is what gave me inspiration for this, because it kills my pc over time. No idea why, but it just makes it run slower, and slower, and slower, until I can barely do anything, then have to completely reset it to get it back to even 90% of it's previous functionality, and that's if I'm lucky. Done it twice, I am NOT doing it again. This is a 2.4K Gaming rig, I am NOT going to have it die just because I want to play a game I love to play.
10455549
That's rough
10455680
Eh, how it is. Sucks but there isn't jack shit I can do right now to fix it.
I'm determined enough that I'd be able to learn code and, potentially, actually optimize MISERY + TAZ and make it so they DON'T do that, but... the chances of that happening in the next while? Not great.
Before I read, is this still going?
10605530
I've lost inspiration for a bit, but I'm working on getting it back. I need to find the right thing to get back my inspiration for this story. Don't worry, Chara's story WILL continue, it will just take some time. ( Can't play the game that originally gave it due to issues. )
10605557
What game would that be?
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S.T.A.L.K.E.R Call of Pripyat with the MISERY and TAZ mods. It has a really unfortunate effect of slowly killing any PC that you play it on over time ( Tested on two different ones ). I've had to Factory Reset my PC 2 times just to play it again and have my PC work and I decided on the 3rd reset that I'm not gonna ruin my 2.4K Gaming Rig just because I want to play my #1 favorite game of all time.
I'm not able to do it anymore, so I'm looking to other games for inspiration / to get the same feeling but... nothing can really compare so far. I'm trying to find a game that can give me the inspiration but... it isn't easy. The Sheer Difficulty of it, and the Numerical Calculations, Situational Awareness, Skill, Knowledge, and such that you require to not only survive, but thrive with those two mods is not something easy to even come close to. Few games have even gotten 15% as close to the same feeling as it provided. I've been looking into other games to try to get the same feeling but... it just doesn't really provide.
The temptation is there to do it again but... I'd never be able to replace what I'd lose if I lost my PC or my files.
I'd basically have to have a way to get my current PC setup back in order for me to truly consider doing it again.
So until I can find a game that won't do that and give me the inspiration and feeling to write like S.T.A.L.K.E.R Call of Pripyat with those two mods did, this story is basically stuck with very little progress on the next chapter, but I am DETERMINED to see it finished. Even if it is the last story ever written on this site, I'll finish it.
Edit: One game does come close. Skyrim SE with the mods I have, but it gives a DIFFERENT kind of inspiration. One that doesn't fit with this story. I needed to play S.T.A.L.K.E.R Call of Pripyat with those two mods to be able to write out quite a few parts of this part of the story due to the complexity of MISERY + TAZ involving guns and the like.
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I can't say that I'm familiar with S.T.A.L.K.E.R. so I am less than useless there.
Perhaps when Atomic Heart gets released or some other upcoming game, you might find your inspiration.
10605630
Never heard of THAT game. Is it an FPS Survival game involving wild, heavily mutated animals?
10605638
Just look it up on youtube.
I'd link a video, but I'm on my tablet, and it doesn't want to copy any links right now for some reason.
On a separate matter, that almost sounds like the Metro games.
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Similar, yeah, except it's significantly different in gameplay, more so with the mods. With them: You must be insanely careful. If you have no armor? Sorry bucko, but a single bullet from a 5.56X45 is gonna kill ya with a chest shot. And any bullet without LV 3 protection is going to give you a really bad time if it hits your head. You die, easily, quickly, and, to quote 'A whole pack of dogs is a pain in the ass, and pain in the ass means - You're Dead' in the zone. Not including dangerous anomalies, psychic mutants, creatures that can survive hundreds of 7.62X39 bullets without dropping dead, Radiation everywhere, and more. And that isn't even 5% of the MISERY Mod.
TAZ? Adds hundreds of guns that are accurate to the time period. Sub Sonic .50 Caliber bullet that's fired from an Integrally Suppressed Sniper Rifle? Yep, that's a thing. Really good for stealth. The AI for hostiles? It's unfair, and annoyingly unrealistic at times, as they always perfectly know if you're there unless you're REALLY fucking good at tricking it, which is an insane skill. But I've managed to become great at it. But the Mutants? Oh no, once you get within a certain radius, they know you're there. It differs for each, and some are exempt from that, but, yeah. Stealth is also affected by your clothing, and more. It has so many complex systems that I'm a Mistress ( Noun, Meanings: American English - #1. A woman in a position of authority or control. #2. A woman having an extramarital sexual relationship, especially with a married man.
(( The #2 American English meaning is the most commonly used from my own experience. )) British English - #1. A female schoolteacher who teaches a particular subject. #2. A woman who is skilled in a particular subject or activity. #3. The female owner of a dog, cat, or other domesticated animal. And two Archaic meanings. I am using the #2 British English meaning. As I use a mix of American and British English in my speaking. It's just how I am. ) of the game with them. I usually played the role of a Ghillie suited Sniper. To put it simply? Anything was dead before it even heard my shot, and their allies were never able to figure out where I was before they died as well. Mutants were the exception, but I could kill those VERY quickly with the right weapons.
It was Realistic in a way that any other games I've found CANNOT capture. The ballistics, the sounds, the Damage, the Survival, and more. I. LOVED IT!
But... yeah.
Ok, to be clear, I do want to see more of this story. (You know it's coming...)
But
Ok, this story really starts off very strong, and has a phenomenal plot and a great concept, till about halfway through. Then the story basically came to a complete halt. The plot stopped moving forward and the story itself devolved into hours and hours of stats. Bear in mind, because I'm blind, I don't read these, I listen to them. And the last half of the story is me listening to twenty minutes of stats. I stop the story and move ahead 15 minutes and hit play...into more stats. I stop the story again and move forward twenty minutes and hit play, and it's more stats.
It took me a while before it struck me that I wasn't hearing any more plot at all after a certain point. The story really didn't continue as a plot, and that all I was doing was fast forwarding through pages of stats.
I'll be honest, it's a god-damn shame because this is a phenomenal story idea with SO Much Potential.
I urge the Author to continue this great story. Focus on the plot. It's the plot that grabbed the reader's imaginations and enthusiasm, not how many armor points his pants holds.
The Monk
“Hundreds of years,” Reflection muttered, enjoying the scratching. “That’s a lot of porn.” - Dropbear
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Thank you for the honest review, it's nice to really hear that my story has as much potential as you say it does and that you did enjoy it, and I'm sorry regarding the stats, it's just that I want to keep people updated regarding the stats so they can understand just how Chara is progressing in terms of strength and abilities, so they can understand HOW she can do the things she can, however, I'm going to have a chapter, that won't be a part of the main story, that will just show Chara's stats, skills, ect, at what chapters they're at, and such. So you won't have to have a repeat of explaining how the stats work and such.
And 'Just how many armor points his pants holds' Chara, as in, the main CHARActer, is a she. Though, they're a futanari / have both sets of genitalia and sexual organs, however, still a she. ( Sorry if I took that bit wrong ) But I have to say, and my bad if this offends you, but: Sorry that you're blind. You can't enjoy some of the pictures that're present in the story or understand what some things look like.
However, I must say that I still haven't been able to get something to be able to give me the inspiration that the one game I played before did for making this story. Unfortunately, if I wish to continue this, I may very well have to 'Bite the Bullet' and play said game to continue writing this story as I can't get inspiration elsewhere. As while I love the game immensely, it slowly destroys my PC and I have to factory reset it to get it working properly again.
It's a really good story, hope to see more, though I really hope to see a bit more 'action' and I don't mean fighting
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You will, though, the fetishes are gonna change a bit. Since of which I've changed some of my preferences since I started writing this story, and... well? Not really gonna write about either something I don't like anymore, OR NOT write about something that I DO like.
( Specifically about something I DO like this time, since I've gained a few new interests since I started writing this ).
Here's to hoping you can find more inspiration. I know how it goes with that as I have similar issues. Maybe watching playthroughs of the game might help as well as adding in new games?
10980056
Nah, it just won't do it, unfortunately. It may take some time before I find the right thing that will give me the inspiration and feeling to continue this, but rest assured, I WILL. I'm not gonna let this thing die.
10980083
Perfect. You've got a real good story going on here. It would be a shame if it died.
Ok way 2 much 4 me but good luck
Well, its apparent that you are not writing a story. Your writing a statistic. Stories are the interplay between characters. No one cares what his armor percentage is, they care how he will treat the foal. What he will do when he enters the town that is burning.
Its the story.
but thats not what your writing, you write 16 pages of statistics.
Im out
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16 pages, not really, besides: The Re-write may / will have things shortened, and changed, while still retaining the information. Or at least I intend to.
The chapter you did that to, As in jumping like that, it was more than likely just bad luck from where you jumped from one point to another.