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Artimus_prime


Love yourself and be happy no matter what

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is this a reupload of an older story I swear I've seen this before

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Yea it was belongs two iron wolf but stop writing it so he ask anyone who wants it so now it’s here

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Who's Iron wolf? My names Ironwar. I know its most likely just you misremembering but now I want to know if this is a real guy or not.
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Yeah, most of the story was made by an editor do me having major problems with spelling and the fact I can't really fill in a story. I can do the start, middle, and ending of one but I couldn't add in the side stuff that just makes a story soo good. Also, at the time some people online and there comments on other stories I made really killed it for me in the writing sense.

I was as big as a mounting

Mountain.

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Whoops! Sorry I thought it said something else 😅

Metroplex is a techno-organic life form

No he's not.

I jumped as I felt a hoof nudge me

Hand.

Definitely liking this story.

Definitely disliking this story. It’s just another turd floating in the warm, fetid, bubbling swamp that is unoriginal displaced fics.

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so its a mediocre story and you're just giving bad criticism?

No chrysalis you should have taken the peaceful way to save your children and gain peace with equestria damn it. I would do the same to help your people but not like this :fluttercry:

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Yeah, more of my falt. I didn't see it till I sent the pages over to him.

Wait, I thought Chrysalis was killed?

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Her body killed but her soul is still alive

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Don't worry I'm using it to the story's advantage

Great work can’t wait for the next chapter

AWW man. I was hoping that the griffons would have run across Megatron and get massacered. Here's hoping the next chapter has what i was looking for.

editor you need one. also why do the griffs have automatic weapons seems out of nowhere along with the king wearing the head of one of his wives

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I am looking into one, all things will be explained later in the story

NO SPOILERS
- rarity:trixieshiftright::flutterrage:

while you have a good idea its hard to read .you have a good imagination

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I'm trying to find a editor and thanks

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he explained in the next line that its from the mountain that formed on him over time

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He was referring to CANON..... which he isn't.

Comment posted by Artimus_prime deleted Aug 28th, 2019

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cybertronians are not techno-organic, they are pure robots

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I know this but metroplex has organic compounds in and on his body and it is a fan fiction if want to put darth Vader in here I can

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Yes they are pure mechanical but they have their own version of blood, organs, even DNA{CNA}. By Sci-Fi terms they would be considered Bio-mechanical. As in Machines that mimic biology. They are born, they grow and they die. And depending on whichever continuity you use or follow that may or my not be accurate. It all depends on how deep you get into transformers lore and timelines.

Where new chapter?

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My comp froze and I was clicking everywhere but it is close to being done

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Ok I hope you can fix it

Comment posted by Artimus_prime deleted Sep 10th, 2019

Again I wasn't notified.....

Also I was kinda hoping Megatron would be a displaced.

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You gave me an idea for a future story thank you

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I hope to see it soon. And your welcome.

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Ps I have another transformer I'd like to see as a displaced If your interested.

I have a challenge if anyone is up for it.

Comment posted by sinewystatue382 deleted Jul 18th, 2021

hay when will the next chapter come out?:heart::fluttercry:

hay when will you update this story don't just let it die:heart::fluttercry:

As much as I liked the story, the writing is all over the place. Some details are lost like why they had to go through a tunnel or how did Shining and the gang didn't go through and the thing with silver and Mason is not explained properly. There's a lot of assumptions needed to read properly like where was Luna during the invasion if she's awaka now in the City or How did Megatron escape to Equestria. There's just a lot of info missing to make it cohesive. However, the idea is good and can be expanded on.

hay when will the next chapter come out?:heart::pinkiecrazy:

update it we all want to see more chapters:heart:

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Its metroplex killing megatron by literally slamming his fist down on him multiple times

I prefer this version of the story better

update it we all want to see more chapters:heart:

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