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Neutral Boy


First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.

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A young bullied kid who escapes from his pursuers ends up in a convention shop. He goes to a merchant and gets a limited offer of a Pokémon backpack, Pokédex, box system, and six Poké Balls for free. Later on, he ends up in an abandoned messy convention, along with several survivors who're hiding from the monsters. Now he and the survivors journey into the unknown dangerous world and survive by helping each other out. Especially going up against foes and creatures that really want to tear each and every living beings apart, one by one.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 34 )

Oh God, Lost Silver and Snow on Mount Silver, and MANY other Pokepastas?

Like clockwork...

Nothing special here. Nothing new, clever, or fun. Just another by-the-numbers displaced fic. If you've read one, you've read this one too.

Comment posted by JustSomeOtherPony deleted Aug 26th, 2019

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Oh you'll find out soon enough, meheheheheheh. *evil grin* :twilightsmile:

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I'll see what I can do to make more chapters.

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Thank you and screw you too.

I'm hooked already, I cant wait for the update :twilightsmile:

Fitting that this updates on Halloween

BTW this Celebi is the one from Lost Silver? And what is the name of this one Meloetta Creepypasta, the one I could find was The Cursed Siren

whan cound you release anather chapter

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I wouldn't even think of never posting the chapter on Halloween, just didn't feel right. :twilightsmile:

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First answer, yes. Second answer, either it's from Meloetta's Tune or Sing Meloetta. Also just want to make what do you think of the story so far and just keep on guessing of what the other four Pokemon are since they haven't been revealed yet.

9920289
Have patience, just gotta think what the next chapter's going to be and then writing it.

9920784
I'm gonna guess one of them is from Snow on Mount Silver, and I actually like the story, just this last chapter have too much explanation

9920999
Not to worry, some of it will be explained later on.

I really like the mlp creepypasta style, it had not been used in quite a while but you gave honor doing it.

Not wait for his response, Misty grabs his shoulder and stands him up. Then she takes his hand as they quietly walk out of the mess area to somewhere else that'll be safe for them to hide in. Looking both ways to see the coast is clear, Misty takes him to the


an eye out for any troubles, hoping that her friends are okay and away from the dangerous monsters everywhere.

This “&” may annoy a few readers, it may reduce the space while writing but unless you were using it as a company name, it may put things out of place.

First chapter is quite nice to read, please check from time to time the images you are using in the story, one or two are down.

Not many people have chosen to write a displaced creepypasta. If it helps. I know about a website where you can write other stories with this theme.

Not wait for his response, Misty grabs his shoulder and stands him up. Then she takes his hand as they quietly walk out of the mess area to somewhere else that'll be safe for them to hide in. Looking both ways to see the coast is clear, Misty takes him to the hallways & keeping an eye out for any troubles, hoping that her friends are okay and away from the dangerous monsters everywhere.

This “&” may annoy a few readers, it may reduce the space while writing but unless you were using it as a company name, it may put things out of place.

First chapter is quite nice to read, please check from time to time the images you are using in the story, one or two are down.

Not many people have chosen to write a displaced creepypasta. If it helps. I know about a website where you can write other stories with this theme

9920784
I don’t know why but is always Pikachu’s creepypasta that gives me the jibbies. Please remember that this story must have MLP in someway or else it will be take down by the admin or moderators.

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Still working on a couple of my stories, going to update them soon before the end of February.

10090211
After that, I'll get back to focusing on working another chapter for this story.

First you post a chapter during Halloween, and now you post one during a pandemic...

10158535
The first word of the chapter is called “sickness”.

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That mainly why I was pointing it out, I know the Halloween one was on purpose, but the pandemic one was a funny little coincidence what with the theme of the story and all

and this is getting dark real fast. where his pokemon dead allready?

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Interesting indeed.
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In fairness on last year before Halloween, I didn't know the pandemic was that very serious. So I just to a different story route just to make it more sense.
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Oh this is just the small taste of dark. Also the part with the six Pokémon dead will be explained later in the chapters.

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Down the road soon, but not sure on when I'll write in another chapter. Only time will tell.

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Soooo... which creepypasta is this leading? Lost on Mt. Silver or Lost Silver?

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