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A fascinating twist on a well established pairing. Look forward to the rest of the story.
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Congrats and well done. Nicely wrapped up, logical progression, cohesive, emotive, and descriptive. I can't necessarily speak to characterization not having watched the show, but it felt natural to me.
This last part felt faster than the others, but then real life does that too, you move along at a crawl, caught up in traffic forever, then suddenly without any noticeable reason you're in the clear and buzzing along full speed ahead. And it is both jarring and oh so wonderful at the same time.