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Contains spoilers from the episode 25!
Twilight Sparkle always believed that Chrysalis had salvation, that is, she would surrender, would have a new form of changeling like the other changelings and would rule alongside Thorax. But when she realizes that all her hopes of believing in the changeling queen have gone nowhere, she wonders why she did nothing to help Chrysalis's redemption.
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-sigh- I wish she was reformed though. It would of ended her arc for good.......
Adding it to my favorites btw.
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It was a great story I always felt like the villains could be much greater if they were reformed thanks for the read tho I loved every minute of it
Yeah... while I would have liked redemption for my favorite crazy bug momma... she was really beyond saving.
Yeah, at least my favorite character wasn't redeemed. *UGh* Even considering it fills me with disgust, especially with the sparky ugly-ling form
Twilight, while I admire that you care about others, your empathy for Chrysalis is not needed. She chose that path herself and nothing short of death would ever make her change her mind.
9857914 Besides there's already far too many redemption already, Equestria needs more villains who just want to watch the world burn.
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N.O.
Good job!
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Eh, just introduce a few _real_ monsters not tuned down to fit into a PG setting. With the actual need to cooperate just to survive we can have Chrysalis working with mane 6 and Co quite quickly. And if the situation would stay this way for a while we can have their interaction develop into something over time. Preferably without repulsive ex-ling forms involvement.
Sadly no fics are using such route for a quite a while. Darn shame, I'd say
I always did wonder why twilight didn't do more or just confronted chrysalis, every time twilight or the mane6 face the villain they get reformed, but if they are not beaten by the mane6 they don't get redemption arc. I guess the power of the T.O.H only works on them to give the villain redemption arc.
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Simple, they can’t handle losing. If they lose, no one gets a second chance. The magic of Harmony is rig and corrupted for being the side of good.
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Harmony has been in the pedestal of "good" for far too long to the point it shines so bright it burns, that anything that not aline with its view sees it as a threat. Even using anyone as a puppet to its machinations, hence fort the cutie marks, the elements and changing the changeling appearance to suit it "perfect world". Where harmony is absolute or else the agent of harmony will get you... But that my opinion and thought, free to correct me if I'm wrong.
Nice work!
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The point of Twilight's depression is that if she had intervened or got to Chrysalis sooner, maybe Chrysalis COULD have been saved. But she didn't and now it is too late.
So yeah, I waited to read this till after I watched the finale, and I'm glad I did since it made more sense. You did a great job, and looking forward to other works.
Honestly I can't see Twilight saying this after Chrysalis turned everyone against her at the wedding, I'd say Chrysalis is probably her most hated enemy, she is for me, even if she is a great villain. But who knows? She forgave Discord for many acts.
I dunno if it’s just me, but it this story could’ve been better if Thorax had taken Twilight’s place. This writing still has potential though.
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I don't think she had it in her. She was given two chances and rejected them both.
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Yeah, I wish she would. Hey, look, the series just got a third story!
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Okm
It's a florist, why would Twilight be surprised to see a lot of flowers? One would expect to see a lot of flowers at a florist.
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Sorry about writing the obvious, i will correct
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It's OK, things happen. Now if the place was bigger on the inside then one is expecting... I have personally experienced this phenomenon. I was at a hobby store in Denver Colorado. From the outside, it looks like a typical shop of average size. Upon entering the place one discovers that the shop actually encompassed the entire city block. My brain shut down.