Ever wondered what those Geodes really were, and how they did what they did? So did Sunset. Unfortunately, she didn't learn her lesson the first time she poked a strange magical artifact, and now she's going to have to deal with the consequences. Combined with the strange and dangerous forces awakened by her meddling, this mess won't be easily solved by just friendship beaming it into oblivion.
Interesting premise, decent writing. You have several rather lengthy paragraphs that could be broken up. And various other issues here or there, but... that was an interesting start and a nice premise.
I'll stick around for some more.
Dammit, Sunny, what have you done now?
Oh good, I was worried she'd become a blind seer. Instead she's a regular seer.
I'm confused, if it's summer why's there still people in the school?
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It's only a few days before summer ends, so the staff is mostly there to start sorting out paperwork and whatever last minute preparations are needed for the coming year, while a few students here and there are either dealing with special circumstances, managing club things, or using school facilities for one reason or another. Band camp, for example, usually occurs over the last few weeks of summer and typically takes place on school grounds.
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Oh, I see
I love this more piz
sounds like an interesting fanfiction, can't wait to see whats going to happen
Give it more I love it :)
Classic Pinkie Pie explaining the situation based on nothing and being right. Also why wouldn't Sunset believe on becoming a goddess, she became Daydream that one time all she needed was a halo to complete the look. As for the sting at the end at first I thought 'Tirek?' but now I'm thinking vampires.
Now THIS is the chapter that explains the main concepts of the story, which is interesting because I don't think I've read Order and Chaos being religions before. Speaking of it would be funny if Cult of Chaos was changed to Order of Chaos just to stir confusion among the world lol.
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Mainly because there's a difference between being a goddess, and being temporarily empowered to the human equivalent of an alicorn. Not least of which is the permanence of the situation, and also a bit of a cultural miscommunication, as ends up being explained in the most recent chapter. Most people on Earth would--and do in our reality--consider beings like Celestia worthy of the title goddess, but that doesn't make her actually a goddess. Sunset, meanwhile, doesn't even believe herself to be as powerful as Celestia--let alone realize anywhere near the full extent of what she's done--so claiming divinity would be a little bit ridiculous in her mind. Not to mention Sunset has tried it before, and was proven thoroughly wrong.
And yes, that was a vampire. On the other hand, who says It's not Tirek? It might just be... or it might not. Guess we'll just have to see ;P.
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Yeah, sorry it took so long, but it's not exactly a subject that you can just drop into casual conversations. There was actually a moment before writing this chapter where i realized i had no idea how to start the topic of religions, funnily enough. But then i realized i had Discord at hand and could just use him to poke things in that direction.
As for Chaos and Order, It's a little bit iffy. Chaos is actually a fairly common concept for "evil" religions in fiction, such as the Warhammer universes or how Discord is portrayed as an evil god in the pony dimension, and real life pantheons will typically have some god or another aligned with it as the token evil guy, such as Loki, Set, and Apophis. Order as a religion, on the other hand, is much less common--although there is an occasional "God of Order" with it as their domain--and I will be treating both very differently from usual. Neither are inherently good or bad for one thing.
i like the lore
Huh. You know, I'm sort of getting Dresden vibes from Discord, and I'm not sure as to why.
The 8 pointed star? Get the flamer brother. The HEAVY Flamer.
"The long and worn leather trench-coat"
Harry... Harry Dresden?
"Adorned with a pure white anarchy symbol across its back"
"What the...?
"Or the opaque black shades and a pure white fedora."
Fedora? White? Yup not Dresden.
So sunset basically screwed everyone over?
Well, at least sunset got her wish.
Well that’s a strange way to start a conversation.
We?
How does he know that?
Oh he missed a lot.
He’s got a good point.
Me and discord got the same brain.
That not an excuse.
Technically, gloria stole it.
What work?
New powers?
Interesting
Well, that got dark.
So much religion.
Well, it was nice to have a moment between rarity and sunset, until it was ruined.
Wait what?
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Hey, better to know of danger than to be ignorant
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But does it have to involve putting others in danger?